You’re amazing at Lily/Teddy stories. Wish you had more!

"We're not really going for coffee, right?" Sage asked, glancing nervously at the closed door. "That bitch might murder Lily."

TEDDY shook his head, "No. We can wait in the lobby for her to leave, and then we can run up and make sure Lil's still alive."
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Did you mean Chase and not Teddy in the above set of lines?

By the way, have I mentioned how much I adore your OCs? Sage and Chase and even Finn were realistic, and not at all Mary Sues. I absolutely love you and your stories. You should keep writing. I hope you still do. If not for others, at least for your own joy. I'm sure that whatever you write will turn out to be brilliant.

Every time I come across it, I forget to mention it in a review becuase I'm usually blown over by your writing style. Not that this chapter was bad, it's just that I made a conscious effort to remember to mention it in the review.

Teddy's full name is Edward Remus Lupin. I just thought you should know it. I know it's inconsequential to the plot of the story, but I came across 'Theodore' in your other stories as well, and thought that you might just not be knowing it.

The thing is, I don't know if you DO read these reviews, because it seems like you've been missing from this site for a while, but if you still are around, and do read these reviews, know that you write some of the best Lily-Teddy stories around.

The call back to RL gets stronger by the passing minute, and yet, I just can't stop reading. Brilliant stuff. (Though I've read it before). I've said it once, I'll say it again, you're amazing.

I have a real life to get back to, finals to study for, and stories to update, and a movie to go out to, and yet, here I am. You're brilliant. I love your writing style.

Such a lovely story!

Great story I love these two together :)

i absolutely loved this. no other words needed.

This was an amazingly awesome short story; and I LOVED it! It was sooooo great...all of the emotions and the progression. It was realllllly well written and basically perfect. Great job!

ooh i loved this!

the characters were believable, the plot was gripping and it was beautifully written!

the last part was amazing (:

the only bit I wasn't sure about was Lily being in Gryffindor 'cause I see her as a Slytherin but that was just tiny. the fic BLEW MY MIND AWAY.

would you mind if I stole your idea of Teddy giving Lily a charm bracelet? Not the charms or anything, just the idea 'cause it inspired a fic! I'll even dedicate it to you! :D

I have four things to say

1. ewwww

2. Theres like a 10 yr difference between teddy and lily, for god sake teddy left school and lily hadn't even started byt the end of the 7th book...

3. Teddy was always a brother to Lily - he probably helped change her nappies...

4. Teddy is meant to be with Victorie

This is so lovely! I love the idea, and it's fantastically written- you're WAY to amazing for your own good, you know that? You use long words that make it all sophisticated and fabulous- and I know I sound about nine right now, but still...

I loved this story.

A lot.

It was angsty and funny and wonderful.

And you make all the characters so funny and realistic and perfect.

Especially Lily and Teddy, but even Victoire.

Love from,

Charlie

This is a first longer story that I've read in ages. It was wonderful to read, it has a very nice flow, and I love your Lily.

that was a GREAAAATT ending C: