Lovely, just Lovely.

Another miss on the scene with Lysander. Featherlight charm if he was going to be carried. Or better still mobilicorpus to lift and displace a body.

This... Is a bit weak. Was already in previous chapter. True invisibility was only Harry's clock. Scorpius might have cast a Dissillusionment Charm in himself. Now... Being in a magical school, either is very hard to do - and you might mention that and why Scorpius can do it -or not and in that case most students would be in the look out for it - and thus you might want to mention why Al is caught off guard twice.

Every once in a while, as one is perusing the Harry Potter fan literature, one comes upon a story that is too beautiful for words. I am thoroughly impressed with your beautiful story. It captured my heart in more ways than one. And the way your tied together all of the different characters and their interactions... just wow
I can’t even. No words. Suffice it to say you are a brilliant wizard of a writer (pun intended). And i absolutely adored every chapter you wrote.

A thousand heart eyes emojis. I've read this more than once and hot damn I love it!

this was hilarious. I mean the sex scenes were unrealistic, mostly I thought you pictures herero sex because gay sex works differently. next was the switching POV that was confusing. in Hogwarts there was no magic like cleaning spells and reparo and so in that would have solved quite a lot. so, it really was strange. what made me read 44 chapters anyway was the chemistry between the characters, the fighting, the hilariousness and Andromeda. I enjoyed her bring a slytherin.

Loved it

Hahaha omg. I ended this history exactly at 3am and LOL xD. i think my neighbours might be a little scared hearing me laugh so much. I loved it.

I tottally was not expecting to love this as much as when I started it. Thanks so much for an amazing story! I love every bit of it.

GUUUUUURLLLLL
I want to say: What it ends? Already?
But like 139K is so fucking much good for you! And like quality was perf. Love you love it. Thank you! :)

I love your stories but you dont need to put but before damn. Im sorry, its not gramitically correct.

When Albus and Scorpius are having sex for the first time, and Scorpius is "cursing and attempting to buck him off" but Albus keeps on going... You know that's rape? Even though Scorpius changes his mind and rather enjoys it later. Still rape. I wouldn't call Albus nice if he's able to fuck someone who is protesting.

This story was great! From the moment Firenze said that darkness was coming after Albus, I had a gut feeling that it had to do with the Death Eaters. The thing I didn't quite understand though was when he said "This snake won't hurt you, not yet..." Because I don't recall having read that Scor ever really hurt Albus. Unless we're talking about his stubborn rivalry with Albus being the indirect reason for Albus having been chosen as the Death Eaters' target. I read the rest of the chapters so fast, I could have missed something. The dire circumstances that the two where in the entire way really made it so that the main focus just could not be shifted from them for long at all. In some of the other stories, there were side chars that I sometimes liked even more than the main pairing, but in this one, Al and Scor were pretty much it. I thought Rory and Louis were hilarious and cute, and I really got a kick out of the fact that Al's best friend was a Slytherin (Rory) and that they were work-out buddies. I used to have a friend that signed up for an Aerobics class with me and it was quite funny how we survived until the end, both not having been in the best shape at the start of it. So, their camaraderie in the Room of Requirement's version of a gym was quite realistic. As much as I adored their different personalities (Louis being feminine and fierce, Rory being an artist and hard worker) and their pairing in general, Albus and Scorpius were just so much more extreme in everything that they were the reigning couple.

The story itself was an excellent read, from start to finish. The scenes with all of the Death Eater attacks were intense and sprinkled with suspense. They were all very well written and kept my rapt attention held the entire time. The danger was always there, always constant, to the point that Albus even lost an eye, which was a lot better than his having lost a limb. And that last scene with how Scorpius decidedly made out with him in front of his family and outright ignored them was downright hilarious. There couldn't have been a better ending, in my opinion. Anyway, I really enjoyed this one. I think it has one of the best versions of Albus and Scorpius of all time (but no one will dethrone my reincarnated babies of Gellert and Albus D!).

Al: I didn't want you to be a huge 'what if' in my life. You were what I wanted. I twas my only chance to have you for a little while.

- So heartfelt! So risky, even.

Ch 21

Dear cosmos, this chapter was my drug right here. Louis summoning Rory to him to set the record straight about his kisses has to be one of my most favorite chapters in this entire story. The fangirls escorting him as if they were on a mission...Louis's pride, their chemistry. And the hilarity of the end when Rory said 'Third time's the charm.' I loved it all.