I wish Jacob and Bella had more time to be with each other there’s been so much drama

Stop does Detective White have a crush on Jacob? Omg That’s adorable

Jacobs hair cutting always gets me. It’s so sad to see his hair go *sobs*

Also this story got me listening to Ray Charles lol

I love this story so far. There’s so much depth to Jacob and Bella and I really like the switching of perspectives. It adds so much to the story

SPOILERS!

Ohhhhhhhhhh my gosh. Okay okay okay. This has been my life for like 4 days, and I had my thoughts in order yesterday, but now it's all gone. lol. I want to start by saying finally finally FINALLY a Jacob/Bella story exists where Bella's actions didn't just piss me off. She didn't go back to Edward. She didn't bow to the Cullens. GOD BLESS YOU. This is everything I keep looking for in a J/B story. Bella's growth was EVERYTHING.

The storyline itself is just lovely. Beautifully paced and so well written. The additions like the venom thing in Bella's hand is fantastically original, and expanding Charlie's backstory is absolutely wonderful!

The relationship develops beautifully, and even the minor separation at Jacob's change wasn't a drag. There was always this obvious "it's coming" essence in those chapters that made them easier to digest while you wait on the couple to come back together.

i had an absolutely blissful time reading this, and I am so SO happy I found this story. I'm definitely going to hop over to your profile to see what other glorious creations you have. Thank you for bringing this story to life!

I love your Jacob so much I ache

Thank you for this story. I can't imagine the immense amount of work that went into it. I love the way you wrote Jake, I won't forget him anytime soon.

Wow. Just wanted to say that this is such a great story and this chapter was really brilliant. The details of Jake's first transformation were perfect and touched on the many swirling emotions the wolves must feel when their life gets turned upside down. And your writing here is so visceral, especially the part about their bodies growing at that last moment to be big/strong/fast enough to encompass the wolf. Great job!

No matter how many times I read it. This is a sweet lovely story that makes my heart happy.

Jake and Bella at the beach was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. It was so sweet, tender and innocent. You brought that whole scene to life in a way that even some famous author's could not. Thank you

ahhhh it's been a while since I've read this (probably several years lol) but I still enjoyed itgreat job!

Excelente historia, me encanta esta pareja de Jake y Bella y tu historia muy especial. Muchas gracias por compartir tu talento.

Did I miss something? What happened to Edward?

That was very well done. It was the perfect combination of sweet and awkward for a first time.