Awesomely tragic and sad story. In my mind, i added a few lines where it ended with Anakin holding his former padawan closely and telling her, "Snips, I'm here." With her replying, "Master?"

:(:-(

Sweet ending to a great story! Good work!

I am trying so hard not to cry but it's not working!

I absolutely loved this story!

A really, really marvelous story. There's character depth, and intruigue, and deep. The ending was sweet-that everyone got a peaceful ending. Or. At least, a sense of closure?

But anywho. I kinda like how Anakin died with Ahsoka/Allecto. They had so much influence toward each other, and Anakin, I think, had to do die with her.

Wonderful, wonderful job. Thank you for saring it! I look forward to more of your stories!

Wow! This story was so beautiful and yet so painfully tradgic. I really think the Jedi Order was an accomplice in staging Anakin's death. I believe they stopped seeing Anakin Skywalker as a human being the moment he was accepted into the order. It seemed like once his humanity was made apparent to the Order and they could no longer just use Anakin as a weapon, they shunned him for daring to be a human and have human weaknesses. Instead of offering Anakin unconditional understanding and acceptance, they turned their backs on him when he and his family needed his jedi brethren the most. Unfortunately, Obi-wan didn't seem to notice this until it was to late. In the end, I think the Jedi Order is doomed to fail whether or not it's by the hands of a sith.

It's the end? Aw, well...it was a good read if a bit confusing at times. :) Do keep writing! :) Brava!

Yay! Another chapter finally! I hope this isn't the end and that Anakin doesn't die. It just shows how much the Jedi Order have failed their own members.

get me shocked, especially because there wasn't a message "complete"...crazy sith force ghosts next?

FAR FAR AWAY IN THE LAND OF , ALL WAS WELL AND GOOD, BUNNIES FROLICKED IN ALFALFA, KITTENS PLAYED WITH YARN HAPPILY,AND UNICORNS HAPPILY FLEW AROUND IN THE FIELDS. BUT ONE DAY AN EVIL DICTATORIAL TYRANT'S EYES DREW UPON THE PARADISE HER NAME WAS DARKJEWXOX, SHE SAW THE FERTILE LAND AND LAUNCHED HER FIRST CAMP GROUND NAMED : CRITICS UNITED! BUT THE CURRENT RESIDENTS WERE NOT ONE TO BACK DOWN THEY CONSTANTLY LAUNCHED ATTACKS! DARKJEW SAW THAT THERE WAS STRENGTH IN NUMBERS SO SHE INVENTED A NEW PROPAGANDA TECHNIQUE CALLED 'REVIEWING' AND 'CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM'. SOON SHE GOT NEW RECRUITS! THEREALGOODYTWOSHOES AND GARASGIRL1 THE EVIL WEEABOO WHO'S DESUS AND KAWAIIS DESTROYED THE UNICORNS AND KILLED ALL THE KITTENS AND BUNNIES! THEIR FORUM GREW STRONGER AND STRONGER AS THEY SPREAD THEIR PROPAGANDA THROUGH OUT THE LAND! BUT THEN THEY BECAME EVEN STRONGER WHEN BONUS KUN AND CHA'S AEGIS JOINED! BONUS KUN WAS FROM THE COUNTRY " THE GOOD THE BAD AND THE JUST PLAIN UGLY" THEY DECIDED TO FROM AN ALLIANCE TO TAKE OVER BUT THE BRAVE WARRIORS THAT THEY CALLED "TROLLS" STILL FIGHT THEM!

CRITICS UNITED IS GETTING STRONGER SECOND BY SECOND! BE CAREFUL!

THE GUARDIANS OF THE PARADISE ARE NO WHERE TO BE FOUND!

Yay! Sooo Anakin hasn't completely lost his mind to grief. Hopefully this will heal some of the wounds cause by this whole fiasco. Ooooooo things are getting good! Please update again soon! I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope he succeeds in getting the twins back and that they are in good health. If something were to happen to them on this mission Anakin's fragile mind would surely fall into the darkness that is already to eager to claim him mind, body, and soul.

THIS. IS. EPIC. I honestly don't know what the hell is going to happen next. I love this story and these characters. You own them.

That was great please continue! Very deep; i'm waiting for something big to happen...

Gods, this is amazing. I love how fast-paced it is, because you get this sense of chaos. When, in fact, the plot/setting/characters, are chaotic. So, Anakin didn't leave, then? I'm guessing Padme found him. Or something. (Or he came back after leaving?)

I loved chpt. 15 the most. You gave Obi-Wan depth, and anger. And Palpatine wanted Obi-Wan as an apprentice? But then-he's after Anakin, what with the suit.

But that's Allecto, isn't it? Allecto-that droid thing-wants Anakin by her side, as he should be, in the suit? Or is it Palpatine that wants that. Or both.

I find Allecto to be a great characterization. She's...dark, droid-ish, but just a hint of humanity. I can't wait to see where you go with this whole plot-line. And what Allecto's going to do with the twins.