Ok I did not read all these 15 chapters to have it end like that. PLEASE keep updating this!

I am a huge fan of this story! Please do continue it!

Okay. Dave is a dick. Perfect example of the most pussiest pusy in existence! Gawd this pisses me off so much ! Who in their right mind would leave a living friend behind just so the guy could have his illusion? Geez!

You almost got me to stop reading this fic, srsly, but Nick's thug-likeness is keeping me going.

This story is very well written and Im loving the dark factor in this. Its a shame its not finished because its one of the better stories I have read on here. I wanna know what happens to Nick as he is attacked by this creature and if Ellis is gonna disobey Nick's order not to come to him. And with Coach's eye, is a neat idea. And I would love to see if anything really comes to light about the things that happened between Francis and Nick and what the rest of the group will think of it. Anyways love the story and I wish you would finish it.

So, I remember reading this fic a long while back and today I remembered that I hadn't finished it (or at least forgot most of it). So I'm re-reading it from the beginning and this chapter had me crying. I feel so silly for doing so, but I couldn't help it. I'm loving it all over again. :)

hehe i love this so much...but its only at 15...and i want to know what happens but i can wait hehe, this is very well thought out, and nice twist making Franciz Nicks brother seeing how we dont know much on his past...and how things seem to be goin for them...keep up the good work hehe

Well I recently went and re-read this story and I have to say I still really enjoy it and was curious if you had any plans on finishing it?

i miss this so so much ;A;

Holy SHIT. Okay so I took the evening to read through all the chapters, and I've gotta say you're keeping me guessing and on my toes. I have no idea why Ellis is acting the way his is toward Nick. The demon haunting Nick? Is that maybe a manifestation of the green flu trying to take over? Or is it from the shot he took that was supposed to keep him immune?

Also I am SO digging on how you linked Nick and Francis together. It's pretty damn awesome. c:

I'm a little if-y on the whole thing with Rochelle and Coach being together, but you're not making it weird or awkward so it's alright so far.

I'm not sure what else to say at this moment, except I can't wait to see another update.

Cheers!

1.) I really hope that asshole Francis dies. Horribly. 2.) The Witch Bride is attacking Nick, right? Is that his ex-wife? 3.) The whole 'mystery figures' thing is flying right over my head. 4.) What the HELL is going on? xD I don't understand, fuuu-

Amazing story though. So much suspense built up, it's making me so jittery for some reason. xD Please continue!

Nick WOULD kill Ellis just to watch him come outta the closet!:3

*intends lame pun*

SO GOOD! I really hope you haven't given up on this story since it's been a while since your last update, please continue soon!

DAMN IT HOLY SHIT WRITE MORE! O.o

...seriously, holy shit. Please update! My stomach bounced off the roof of my mouth with that last one, holy. freaking. CRAP.

SO AWESOME!

-K-

WHAT IS HAPPENING?

I am utterly amazed and completely enthralled by your story. Very eager to see what's going on with Nick (but very much enjoying the hints dropped and the suspense) and definitely hoping he puts a bullet in Francis. Or a sword. Keep up the wonderful work!