Reviews for Proposal
Hope Sponaugle chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
More!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Soooo darn cuteeeee
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
please continue the story i like it.
nana chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I saw continue
Jeanalvernia chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
yessss continue please...
CrystalBud chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
adorable, continue, please?
Jasmine chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Yes I would like a continuation please. x) Sasuke's attitude was so... just so like him. :)
kandita chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Very very cute...yes please add another chapter are 2
Sue-lu-lu chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
please continue its cute xD
hpnarutardsjedipirate1234 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Wow...

You're story is nice...

Write more please!
TheLittlePrincessSnowWhite chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
yo better contenue or i'll contenue it for you
keinei chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
very nice indeed
TooBlueForYou chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
This, overall, is very nice and cute.

There are a few problems I have with it which is...

a: Hinata stutters a bit too much, but whatevs. She still might be insecure...etc...

b:

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"You're eighteen now, perfect marring age."

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You might want to change that to 'marrying'.

c: I am not entirely sure who the 'idiot' is... Naruto perhaps? (really... He's my only lead...)

But other than that, I totally loved it. It was awesomely fantastically cute! I wouldn't mind reading another part to it ;)
God of Sharks chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
It's okay. Could've been less rushed, but still good nonetheless.
sasuhina chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
omg this is too good...plz continue
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