I like this poem. it has Spyro saying everything.

I like this poem, especially the last three lines. Nice job :D

~Princess

~Ivystar of RainbowClan

Wow, what a lovely poem that has captured Spyro's adventure well. It's very hard t find any good poems on the net, but yet this short one was well flown and written. Great poem :)!

Really nice poem :)

I like this poem, it describes Spyro's position very well :)

Also, don't listen to those 2 rude people, they don't know what they're writing, they are the ones who have no life. It seems as though they only registered on this site to bash you and other writers like that, clearly they don't have anything better to do. Just ignore them, and report them if you will, they are just plain rude, their behaviour is uncalled for.

love it man... love the poem... and just so you know you are not a failure of a writer ok... that guy was a jack... who wanted others to quite doing what they liked to do just because he is insecure about himself... there are people like that in this world... anyways... keep writing onyx...

Hiya, failure of an author. Ah, what a wonderful fic to troll on this fine day. I do indeed hope you enjoy it :)

Anywho, this story, this chapter, every single word of it, you, and your life are all an epic fucking fail. You have no

life whatsoever, so I suggest getting one, fucktarded ass raping shit nugget. Nobody loves you. You are fucking empty,

whatever you believe, it is true. I can tell. You have no right to write. You should grow the fuck up, get up, grow a pair,

and realize what life is. It's NOT all sunshine and rainbows, bitch. You're this old, yet you're still not doing anything

with your life. What raging bullshit, you empty fuck. At least get your ass up and make something of your life other than

writing pitiful, shitty-assed fanfiction. It makes my eyes bleed, especially the scripted chapters and songfics. They're

all a piece of shit, but those above all else. Move on to something actually meaningful. Get a life, get a girlfriend (or

more than likely, boyfriend, seeing as you write so shitty), and, most importantly, get off of this sad mess you call

FanFiction and a life, fucker. ~

beautiful, love the last line, 'I am a legend, bound to the sky' *tears* I LOVE IT! btw what is a Ballad?

I never see much poetry in the Spyro archive anymore. This poem is very well-described of it's environment. Sorry I can't give much of a review on this one, I don't know much about poetry, but I love yours :) Keep it up, man, keep it up!

Revitalization is Coming!

~SpyroXCynderMyLove