Interesting story, very much enjoyed it. Although disappointed to see it finish

Excellent story. Flitwick is too often ignored as a character, but he is fascinating. He makes a superb teacher for Harry. It should have explained what happened to Harry after Draco's death. Perhaps a second story. One can hardly believe Lucius accepting the death without attempting to kill Harry. Slytherin lost a student & head of house. How would they accept this? What was the basis of the fight between Harry & Hermione? Bad enough that Hermione got a detention. This stories could inspire a lot of other stories. Great results.

Very good story, start I would like to see it continued.

Truly spectacular story. I wish you could write more.

Your ideas and action scenes are infinitely better than anything Rowling gave us in the last three books. Absolutely love the way you wrote Flitwick.

Excellent work!

Both the scenes with Dumbledore and Filius's teachings were interesting, regarding the former, it was a pretty great way for him to have his death make a difference instead of euthanasia by Snape.

Is Harry refering to the horcruxes?

love it and maybe it will be continued one day :)

goodwork

This was really really good. You should mark it as complete and just leave it.

Intriguing. Is there more?

What a horrific, agonizing but amazing beginning!

I guess this was okay. Is it done or will there be more? You should put a complete tag on it if it's ended. There wasn't a profound thing here and besides the fight it was kinda boring. Well-written, but boring.

Interesting start. Hope you'll get back to this once Ambient is wrapped. Thanks for a great read so far.