aw such a heartbreaking ending! :')

Fantastic one shot.

Him asking her to come with him was something I'd never considered, but once I read it, it just seemed so obvious. I'm almost glad you didn't make him stay for her, or for them to do anything other than give a light kiss, because that makes this fic all the sadder, and more unique as well.

Thanks for this. I really enjoyed it.

As I've already said this on LJ... you're probably my fav P/O writer. :)

This story is so damn well written. Keep up the great work. :)

I really enjoyed this story and hate to see it is finished. It was a different take on the fallout and I like that he asked her to run with him. Good job!

This was unobtrusively written, and it felt right that he left in the end. Thanks for sharing!

I would really like this to be the actual scene, it's a lot more hopeful that I expect it to be. Heartbreaking, but wonderfully written. :)

This fic is wonderful, it flows really well and the characters are very true to form. Great job! Would love for you to continue it, sequel? ;)

Very sad but nicely written!

OMG! This is so sad I can't stand it!

Heart-breaking but in a beautiful way. A perfect, raw, emotional P/O moment.

Hi!

I liked the idea Peter asking if she will come with him. Nearly everyone suspects that Peter will run once he learned the truth, but i have never read the idea of asking Olivia to join him. Of course it wont happen, because it would kill the show, but its a nice idea anyway :)

Wow, C! Such incredible Bolivia angst.

I was so hoping he'd turn around and throw her on the bed.

Just wow. Smooth and well-written like all your pieces, but I like the happier stuff better.

This was amazing! I'm still in awe... I didn't think i could be satisfied with a Peter leaving scenario, but you wrote it perfectly and very realistically. Or at least as realistic as a fictional tv show can get :) I can seriously hear their words just as you wrote them and the emotional charge is awesome! Thank you for writing this!

;_;

In a good way.

You know this is actually quite original in terms of Peter finding out and his reaction to Olivia. I like how you wrote them here. And Peter asking her to come with him. The talking, the hug, the kiss. Fleeting but it felt right.

PS. I can't believe it's already Fringe day again! This past week went by surprisingly fast. Huzzah!