Wow! I just found your story, and i must say amazing! Im so glad you continued writing this, so many storys have ended to soon. For that i thank you! Ur story is written so well, so complex i love it! One more to go! Your gone so far this is an amazing accomplishment!

Thank you

Hi, I must tell you that I've fallen in love in this story. I like every moment with Draco and Parvati, I think they are so cute. I thank you that you didn't kill Sirius. OMG I love Harry and Ethan. Once I thought that there was not enough Weasleys but I did not miss to them because there happened so much and I did not have time to think about this. I hope that you will finish your creation. I sorry if my English is weak but I still learn this language. I wish you a lot of inspiration.

Love this so so much! Don't think I've been this hooked on reading for a while! You write wonderfully and dragged me through a whole lot of emotions with the characters! Who needs sleep or to do chores? Am very much looking forward to the last chapter which I'm sure will be just as fantastic !

I literally stayed up till 5:20am to read this story. now I can’t wait for an update

this is the most fantastic read I’ve had for a long while! thank you so much for comigg back to edit and finish the story.

can’t believe I just found this story today. can already tell it’s gonna be a great read

I JUST found this story and have obsessively read through it the past few days. I love this SO much. Especially, SIRIUS BLACK IS ALIVE omg. I mean, I adore the story plot of James and Lily too, but I HATE Sirius dying in canon. And he's married! Now he just needs some children, haha. Or maybe that's a fanfiction I'll write one day. I've always loved the idea of family-centered Sirius. But wow, you almost killed me early on in this story with Sirius's almost deaths, ugh. But good writing! You are very talented, it is rare to come by something this well written AND well thought out. You have clearly put a lot into this story, the characters, and the plot. If you do write a novel of your own, you must let us know!

Well, I enjoyed the chapter very much :)
A little bit of warning though: While somewhat understandable, please refrain from talking about decline in reviews/a chapter not getting as many reviews as you had hoped for (even if it is understandable.) Makes me people think you are doing this for attention's sake and not your own, and, to be frank, seems a bit immature.

Anyway, on to actual review.

Scene 1:
Nice and believable reaction, wondering if the Dumbledore from the other timeline knew about harboring a part of Voldemort's soul.

Also nice (I suppose) to see him being honestly terrified at the prospect, going into shock... something I don't remember him being in the books.

What is interesting here, too, is to remember that this Harry doesn't have bookHarry's two years of warfare and death under his belt... at least not in the same way Harry did in Deathly Hallows... I'm still uncertain about when the war started picking up in this timeline (see PM)
Nice speech, Potter
And nice seeing his friends' reaction to the news of Snape being a good guy and the destruction of Nagini

Scene 2:
Love the brotherly interaction between Harry and Ethan.
And of course Hermione was the one to pick up on something being wrong, maybe catching the true meaning behind what Harry had to do.

Loved the meeting in Dumbledore's office. Not to mention the insight into Harry's thoughts and emotions on his trek there.
Nice surprise that the grownups have known about Harry's other life for quite some time. Nice explanation as to why Lily sacrificing herself here wouldn't work.
Well, that was a nasty surprise Voldemort had there, attacking with a dragon.
And nasty tactic: Promising the parents of half-blood that their child will live if they capture their own child and a muggle-born... nice codeword... guess he is calling in reinforcement from brother-Dumbles or to evacuate/protect the children.

Understandable reaction from Severus upon learning the truth... but have to admit, am quite happy to see that Dumbledore doesn't just take their berating lying down. He loves Harry and did try his best to prevent Harry from having to go through this.

Scene 3:
Nice that the Potters (minus Ethan :( )got to spend some hours together, just talking... which is both a blessing and a curse. Nice that they were safe from the battle, but must also be something for their worst nightmares, knowing that their friends and family are in the thick of things.
Plus, it saved you the trouble of writing a large scale battle XD
A lot of heartfelt words :(

Interesting meeting between Harry and the Weird Witches.
Poor Ethan :( Good thing Granny McGonagall was there to hold him back.
Another nice speech from Harry... makes one wonder how many of Voldemort's followers will possibly turn on him.
Well, that was a another nasty surprise from Voldemort: Killing a true Gryffindor with the sword of Gryffindor. Seems a bit crude for Voldemort though. It is, however, a nice way to close plot holes about brother wands, ownership of Elder wands and still getting soul piece destroyed... and Harry is dead... for now XD
Sorry, but I don't think you have the gall to let him remain dead. Resurrection Stone aside, with the way he was supposedly killed, permanent death is far from certain.
Fawkes... phoenix tears... healing. Fawkes' tears were more potent than Basilisk Venom, even after the venom had entered his system, so even if the sword had absorbed the venom to make it stronger, an impalement in the chest (as long as the heart isn't completely destroyed, in which case even Fawkes' tears may have a few problems) shouldn't be a problem, especially since probably a few of the adults know CPR and the likes.
To say the probably most infamous words, Voldemort: You should have gone for the head XD
Plus, Ethan deserves the chance to knock his brother on his ass for scaring him.

Great chapter (and inclusion of my name, must have been so hard XD) and eagerly looking forward to the next :)

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar

It is really an amazing story what you made.
I need it's last chapter

Great Googly Moogly what a chapter- nah what a story!

I love this story and i am so glad that you continued to write it. Most of writers don't do that so I appreciate it a loot. I am just checking fanfiction these days to see if you have been posting and now finally! This chapter was just so beautiful and heartbreaking and the music... I just cried while reading the whole chapter. Thank you for finishing this story. You have been writing such a good fanfic. It's just so easy to feel the pain of harry and that makes the story so precious. I am rooting for you!

This story has been so wonderfully written. The love shown between Harry and his family is so heartwarming and really makes this story come to life. I really got choked up when Lily, James, Sirius, and Remus we’re walking Harry to Voldemort in a mirror of how they did when he turned the stone in the book and they were walking in the Forbidden Forest. It hit home more because they were all alive and watching their child make such a brave sacrifice. Harry dying by Gryffindor’s sword was completely unexpected. I can’t wait to read the final chapter!

Hello! I loved this chapter, especially the part where the Three Witches told Harry how many people would have died if he hadn't chosen to make his Wish of Life.
I do wonder what will happen next, as it was practically confirmed that Harry wouldn't live through it, as it was a price to pay for the other lives.
I love your writing style as well! (I think I posted a review saying that as an anonymous reviewer - Hunter I think)
I look forward to the next chapter!
(Oh, I also love how much more ruthless you made Voldemort in this book. It makes more sense to me, because as powerful as Harry is, Voldemort is a grown man with much more knowledge of magic than Harry, so it's almost impossible that Harry could escape him so many times without anyone by his side. I figured I should mention that :D)
Continue writing at your own pace, and make sure to stay safe!

This chapter was so beautiful.
I really wish that Harry didn't have to die though. It was so heartbreaking.

Ah so he’s going to be dead dead in this one? Interesting.