I really enjoyed this story so far. I hope you didn't give up on this story. Please update!

I love it poor cloud lol running into oddsterz at every corner

isnt this meant to be a cloud and tifa story? u said in ur thingy colud&tifa?...

...humble my arse. :D But you gotta love Zack eh?

I like the way you did Aerith. And umm... since some were talking about pairings, my two cents is that I'd prefer it being kept platonic.

Hiya! I'm a reader/friend/beta-buddy of The Lone Wanderer's and he put up an author's note saying that you would be continuing some of his stories. I decided to come by and check out your fic for a preview of what was to be expected.

Anyway, I'm a full-blown Cloti fan (Just ask Wanderer), so I appreciate the lack of Cloud and Aerith fluff. I dunno if you mean for them to be romantic, though I didn't get that at all, but the story flowed well. Secondly, you hit the nail on the head with ol' Zacky. However, I have to say that Cloud is a tad off. Too outgoing, perhaps? The voice you write is interesting, how you mention future occurences before they happen. I'm curious to see how Tifa will show up and if you'll jump them out of their teenage years and whatnot.

The obsessive side of me *Points at username* feels this must be mentioned. I did notice a few minor grammar-related errors (i.e. Past tense instead of present), but your grammar is MUCH better than so many people's I've seen around this website.

Good job with this fic and I can't wait to see how you merge yours and Wanderer's ideas!

-Valk

OI! I want Zack and Aerith to meet. And when's Tifa coming back into the equation? (:

Thought I'd swing by and read your story since you've read mine - it was the least I could do. It's intriguing. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing big.

Good job.

Yay, Zack is here! And he shifts to, thats cool. I wonder how Aerith will take the two of them?

AWESOME! Zack is a shifter too? that is amazing. I am so glad i stumbled upon this gem. You are an amazing author. Can't wait for more. Just one question, is Zack is SOLDIER?

Oh, interesting plot twist! :D Yay for Zack- he's one of my fave characters. Hmm...Is there gonna be any Zack/Aerith in this? Aerith would have to meet Zack sooner or later...

-Hana

very cool story, just finished reading your three chapters and cant wait for the next one, im a fan of all things FFVII.

Oh wow, this is really cool. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love the new chapter! Sorry I didn't review sooner. I had read it, but had to leave right after I read it! XD Anyway I am really wondering why Aerith doesn't seem so shocked. I am sure that the reason is very interesting. I also can't wait until he meets Zack! 8D

Well I am waiting for your update!

I love it. Cloud just loves messing with everyone. ;D

So, funny story, I was listening to Four Minutes when I logged on and saw you had uploaded. And your story is about time. xD Yes, I know, I'm uber lame.

And Oh, it was Aerith. Well, that makes far more sense. xD Hm I wonder if they'll meet Zack and Sephiroth...or are you not including SOLDIER in this fic?

-Hana

yay! another chapter. truly love this story. and why do i have a feeling that girl is aerith?