Great story : ) well written too : )

Searching through and I find this...I'm so glad that I did. I'm looking forward to reading on!

Why don't u call him edward thats his name

I found this by looking at the link you gave from your youtube account. It is a beautiful and sad story. I love it and can't wait to read your other stories!

amazing :)) very captivating

I love this story :))))

this is so intriguing :DDD in the first chap, i like how u portrayed Al :)

…nice…

OO' Awesome! Update soon please! I must read more!

:D Seriously, it's awesome!

Mustang's digging himself a deep hole. Congrats on your win. Good chapter, looking forward to more.

I really liked the exchanges between the brothers. It's just like them. Very curious about Roy and his imagination.

Excellent story. I really enjoyed the most recent update. Also, that is a lot of fears. :O You are indeed very brave to live in such a frightening world. Congrats on the nomination! :D Good luck and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

LabyrinthineMind

I think Roy would be a good daddy. Ha, Riza knows how to get his attention!

This is an intriguing story about Roy in an almost-father capacity, something not seen too much in FMA, most stories hinging on his sex appeal and escapades. Putting him in the fragile situation of father-husband figure with a twist is bold, and sets up a very good storyline. Good idea.

This is getting more intriguing. I like Roy's musings about fatherhood.