Wow! Amazing story! Wonderful pacing (I was surprised with the amount of action that occured so 'early' in the piece), I was surprised, I certainly laughed out loud at times, and best of all you gave DiNozzo (and us!) some closure at the end. Thank you for taking the time and effort to complete this story. Kudos!

Great story!

Deeply moving story that brought tears to my eyes...thanks for sharing.

amazing.

I enjoyed your story very much!

1 second his in a critical condition the next its suddenly 10 days later and you skipped all the good hospital moments well I'm out bye.

Hi again.I am reading through your stories.I hope you read this cos I miss your BRILLIANT stories,and I wonder why you are not writing and posting new ,PLEASE post some more I miss you.

Adequate.

Oh no...

you deserve brownies for sharing but I'm with Gibbs that thing would be walking funny by now and sing high notes. the writing is great. love Jackie in this

I do not know if you will read this but thank you for sharing this story. It is amazing hard to read in some parts but unfortunately they are true as well. There are real life Tony's in this world that work very hard every day to help stop this type of sin. I just wish it was not necessary. Thank you for again for sharing your wonderful story.

Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

terrible but brilliant story it's probably one of the best fanfic stories i've read. I couldnt stop reading the story. Your a great writter, heres hoping you'll go into writing crime novels. Eagerly looking forward to reading more of your work.

I found this a really heartbreaking story.. Especially the ending had me almost crying.
It is hard to imagine doing such an undercover job. Being such a different person than normal, somebody who oposses the values of everything you believe in..

I think this story was marvellous and I am definitely checking out your other stories.
Thank you!

Go,Gibbs! SO glad he punched the SecNav!