| Reviews for Father Forgive |
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Viae chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 ...Holy fucking shit. |
n0t1nuse chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 Oo-er, sex in a church. I like. Though my grandmother would kill me if she knew I was reading this. XD Seriously, though, this was nice. It was well written and I enjoyed it. It was also kind of funny, but I don't know if that's what you were aiming for so . . . apologies if it wasn't XD. |
fatcatswucky chapter 1 . 11/1/2010 Heh...I like it. Especially "You don't have to beat yourself up for your God to love you. He'd better fucking love you just how you are." So true 3 I was giggling the whole time. :D |
Katie - Lyn Della Robia chapter 1 . 7/31/2010 Giggle! I love it Kizu! |
kovodelnik chapter 1 . 5/27/2010 OMG that was so fuckin awesome! I love it absolutely its original and wrote in catching way |
494dwangel chapter 1 . 5/6/2010 naughty boys...i think this was cute in a lemony way...sex in a church, wow blasphemous much? |
Mandolin77 chapter 1 . 4/23/2010 I saw 'sex in a church' and I just had to read! X. D Beautifully written, sacrilegious metaphores and all. Usually Mello is the confident one who's in-charge, so it was nice to see him humbled for a change. Adding this to my favorites! |
Sisyphean Effort chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 Loved all the religious metaphors sprinkled through this (palmer's prayer, angel's cry, etc.). It really enhanced the overall theme. And it was really beautiful. I love abusing religious metaphors... And you even put the fic. under the category "spiritual"-he-he, that's funny. :) |
dramaq chapter 1 . 4/14/2010 Oh hot DAMN! The controversy made it hotter. I love how confident Matt is- he's so sure of himself and his love for Mello, so sure that Mello feels the same way. And his actions mirror his words. I squee-ed inside when Matt said "And you liked it. Now, how about we go live our lives full of sin and shame? We can worship each other. I promise, it will feel better that way." Love it! |
PrincessPika chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 Sex in a church. New kink has been discovered xD Great job! -Pika-chan |
Nothing's Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 Okay, I have to do it. I confess, I am the orginal requester of this at Anon Kink. lol Thank you so much for filling this, I had actually forgotten about this as I thought no one would fill it. Very well written, and exactly what I had hoped for. (Oh and interesting use for anointing oil, I think I can burn in hell happy knowing that there is another use for said oil.) |
ShinigamiMailJeevas chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 That was awesome. :) |
GogglesAndVideoGamesOhJoy chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 Ohehmgee. Sexy. |
gbfwolf chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 *Facepalm* You had to use a "head" joke ey? XD The story was awesome~ Thanks for that shot of kink... I needed it. :) |
Lucifaera chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 Loved your story. Wrote one to this request, too, but in German and didn't manage to translate it... But as the theme is the same, the storys are somewhat similar (not similar enough that it could be plagiarism, on some places you've had a lot better ideas than me) Want morekink- things |