Wow! Exhilarating really! Beautifully written!

thank you so much for completing this AMAZINGLY AWESOME ! story for us ;) I LOVED the changes you did ;) I can't believe that I haven't read this before and I'll be back to read it a lot more in the future ;D

Uh-oh, I thought this was just a story of a more-than-usual jealous and possessive Edward but apparently, there is much more... It is all a bit scary as it can go to any direction at this point.

Just a few thoughts…. Will she be healed up again and intact once more as she did her power healing thing again when she was cold and edward was speaking to eleazor… Also the big power burst thing at the end of chapter 39. Also what about having pierced ears? I hope edward sorts all this before her change.
Second they should get her lots of hot water bottles or an electric blanket along with the quilt.
Third i realise you haven't kept completely to character as it's your own story and stuff…. Also stephenie meyers edward would never of peaked at her naked when in the wardrobe…. But i just don't think edward would ever call bella baby. His pet name for her is love and a few times sweetheart. It just feels wrong.
Other then that i love your story and I'm really really enjoying it. Thankyou xxxx

Hopefully bella will see it this way too but i really don't think she can blame the cafeteria accident on edward. I mean it was so indirect... Surely whoever spilled the liquid on the floor that she slipped on is more to blame. To be honest it all was just a huge accident that couldn't really be blamed on anyone.

Just read chapter 14. Okay lots of things i don't understand. Why didn't emmett and Rose and esme and Carlisle etc help more. It should of been easy as pie to protect them all. Secondly did bella's shield have some kind of force that not only forced paul and jake away but her parents too and they got injured? Or did Paul attack them? If he attacked them that goes against all that they are right because they're meant to be protectors of mankind. Also haven't the wolves broken treaty as they have attacked unprovoked. Finally i am so confused by bella's powers. So can she read everyone's mind or just edwards? Is it because of the mate connection... Are they like intrinsically linked?

Awesome story! Thank you.

Another brilliant story. I love the non human Bella stories so thank you again. Once again I love your writing style, characters and plots. Wonderful!

That was a very good story. Thank you for sharing it!

Good start. Enjoying this. Kerrion, I agree with you about guest reviewers. None of them could probably write any story at all. However, it is think coming. Thing is commonly misused.

Loved this twist on the original! I am going too miss these two!

AlSO , THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH WRITING IN A DIARY OR JOURNAL ! YOU OBNOXIOUS HAG! .

Can this guest reviewer kindly fuck off ? Can anyone be anymore obnoxious ? If you have so much problem with every damn story you read ? Why don’t you write your own stories then ? You go on these rants when your ass probably can’t write a sentence . These stories were written for free by These awesome people so we could have some entertainment then we have hags like you who ruined it for everyone else they might be mistakes but you know what ? It’s free you are not paying for it . Also have another “think “? Seriously ? Think ? It’s have another thing coming .

Loved it

I loved this story. It was so different. What a wonderful read- then again, I have loved all the stories of yours that I have read. Truly- this was fantastic.

Thank you,

Knit