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This really was the best Isle Esme I have ever read. I just loved it!

Was she gone as in she was dead? Or wass she passed out? But overall it was REALLY good. :)

Perfect! This was a great story to 'fill in' SM's 'fade to black.' Thanks! :)

Oh my GOSH! That was incredible! So well writen! I loveed it!

ok...so i always think these stories are going to get edward al bella ALL wrong...but u don't! i love you! u wrote this soo well no joke... u are a very good writer!

Wow! I like your take on their first honeymoon night! :) Thanks for writing!

So beautifully written, so tasteful yet so much passion and heat. To know Edward's need for control, how close he is to losing that and his honesty in stating he could kill Bella at any time. "Bella, will you...have me?"...GAW! And her total acceptance of him, leaving her very existence in his hands because of her complete trust and devotion...very powerful. Thanks for writing this.

And you've been hiding where?
This was really, really, really, really, beyond brilliant. I liked how you didn't go into too much detail as that takes away the innocence of the story. I liked the similes and metaphors you used, especially Bella's fire, that is so how she would've felt.

And that line "Bella will you have me?" Oh, that's so Edward!

After reading what seems like 100's of Isle Esme stories this is the one I think accurately reflects Bella and Edward perfectly. No need to go into graphic detail the passion they feel for each other is easy readable. Truly wonderful well done

OMG! Where have you been all my life! U r amazing! I Love your way of writing! If Any man ever says words like this "Bella, will you... have me?" -I will surely die! Its so...PURE! Good job!