very cute story i really liked it . :-)

well great job.

Those two are very cute together

Yea good chapter.

Great Job.

Brandi is an Idiot.

Raph is too but I never liked him.

My mind is thinking that I am not going to like the next words but we will see.

Good job

Good Chapter

"That was two people in love breaking each others hearts".

Oh so true. Great start to a story.

Yay for including Eleanor.

Finally. I really loved the burning of the clothes.

-Kate

love it!

Mary and Marshall laughing as the clothes burned cracked me up. Mary coming to terms with what she wants and what Marshall is offering bonus points. Looking forward to the next part.

glad she burnt their stuff..too funny..

love the ending..and yeah bet she wont be disappointed...lol

graet stuff

thanks

Wow! Brandi and Raph really are stupid. She warned them what would happen!

"married to Marshall. What a thought."

Yes it is! I love reading Mary/Marshall married stories!

but what about the Pizza? hheehhe

Haha! I loved the last line, I really did! I think Marshall still might have waited to do that with her, but hey, I liked it ending like this even better! :) I absolutely loved this story, and I think you should write more for IPS. It was great! And I liked when Mary threw the clothes in the garbage can and set them on fire. If Mary was really mad, I actually think she might do that. Great story!

really great chapter :) love the entire story... i cant wait to see where you take this one :)

Great story. Please update soon.