Randall deserves a second chance. And to get better.

This was heart-poundingly good. Why haven't you continued?

It's really detailed, I can see how much imagination was put in here, to make it seem reall, as if you were actually there. I hope there will be next chapter, since I'm curious how are they going to react.

Please write more! I really want to find out what happens to randalll!
Your a great writer by the way! XD

Aww, I like the story but it's just sooo sad... :(

Aw, poor Randall! He was always one of my favorite characters, and this story is just..sad, but in a good way.

Are you continuing this? I'm begging you, please continue! This is so sad but amazing, and I hope there's more of it! Wonderful job!

ohmygosh i loved it soo much, are you planning on continuing the story?

Man,every time I read this story I feel so sorry for Randall.

But it's like A wrinkle in Time. Sad, but it's a awesome story to read.

Oh jeez...

This is actually very well written, and the characters are all...in character...but best of all...

Randall angst!

I just saw this movie for the first time a few days ago, and I was enamored by Randall's character. I even had stories similar to this one going through my mind.

It's exiting to read another person's interpretation of the scenario.

I hope you continue it. Actually, I implore you to continue it!

-Tilts head-

Interesting.

I want to see how this goes.

I just have to see how this ends. Amnesia, genious

that was good. i hope there will be more to it.