With how long Aeris spent naked in the freezing cold, she reaaally wouldn't have been as okay as she was by the time they reached the town.

for something you wrote in highschool its pretty good.

I agree with aeris sephiroth is an oddball.

3 chapters in and I am impressed! You have sephiroths personality spot on! An impressive feat for any writer on this site.

I'm still afraid for Aeris. o_o

I feel for Aeris already. She's with a nutcase that laughs to himself. Brilliant. o_o

I feel like the main problem that's stopping me from liking this story is Reno because I didn't understand how and why he is relevant. Obviously after Sephiroth did what he did to her, they probably wouldn't work out as a couple but Reno...

In one chapter you have him say that "Aerith and him go back." How? Because he was a Turk? Did he love her from a distance? That should of been explained via a flashback or conversation because it just made him see more random than he already was. Out of everyone in the group he was too vocal when it came to Sephiroth, especially after the battle. He was working for the same company as Sephiroth, he's probably done bad things too, not to the extent to Sephiroth, but it doesn't give him the right to constantly bash him. Someone like Tifa, who's had three important men in her life MURDERED by Sephiroth, should have been the one doing the berating not the redhead.

Besides that the story was fine, I wished Sephiroth hadn't raped her but it gave a different perspective. Not everyone is going to be shitting rainbows and sunflowers at the end.

I still think Tseng would have made more since he has ties to Aerith or established Aerith's and Reno's history.

The transitions in their lives are simply awesome, though Cloud's death came as a huge blow! I really enjoyed this, thank you! I'm rooting for Sephiroth though! XD

hey, i was completely hypnotised by your story i couldnt stop reading it, i know its wrong but i kinda wish seph and aeris would make ago. Would you mind pming your website?

I love your story but no! I love sephiroth x aerith! And I know it wasn't what he deserve and about everything he has done but no they deserve to be happy! So Sephxaerith forever!

it was definitely worth my time reading! i love it! and i love the aerith sephiroth pair! can you make one more part for both of them though? i like aerith better with seph

It was worth reading, definitely! I love it, an open ending, usually I don't. But with these three characters, I was actually hoping for it(even though happy ending was bigger in me) BUT I guess that just couldn't, considering to all what Sephy has done.

I loved every bits of every chapters. I didn't see much spelling mistakes, nor grammar errors, your English was so good, the whole fic was written very well. Some scenes managed to play out in my head, including the fight scenes. And I really adored it.

Now as it's an open Ending, I'll just have to imagine that Sephiroth and Aeris became in good terms again, and the threesome with Reno isn't gone. LOL I seriously just didn't want either Reno or Sephy to be left out. Reno deserved her, Sephy doesn't. But Aeris deserved to find ease in her, without Sephiroth for that part, it would be hard. Ok! That settles it, in the end, the three of them are all together happy. XD Hahaha forgive my weird imagination.

I LOVE THIS FIC! 0 Thank you so much for sharing it to us. :D

:'[ Awwwwwwwwww now I feel sorry for Sephy gah, but he kinda deserved that. I feel bad for Tifa the most... D'X

And I feel sorry for Reno but... is it too much to hope for a happy ending? really? TTTT *nevermind that* I'll go read the last chap... :]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nandato(what the)! CLOUD DIED? and Barret as well? T_T Nooooooooooo! TTTT POOR TIFA! *cries in an emo corner*

But but...ok...I'll try to calm down... *sniffs*... :'[

Huwaaaaaaaaaah! I don't know, I don't know :'[

Reno... Sephy! What now TT I'm now hoping Aeris wouldn't end up with either of them... But at the same time, them with her. What's wrong with me? And oh... I love the fighting scenes, much clearer than mine I think! :D It was awesome