Reviews for Modest, Too
dead feather chapter 5 . 7/27
This was different. Interesting. I liked many ideas in this :)
My only grieving point, sort of, was Harry/Tracey and their on off relationship. I mean its very real Like and all. But I read mostly to get some breathing space away from real life. Lol
gginsc chapter 5 . 4/17
I think he should have just packed up and left but the story was interesting.
Jimbocous chapter 5 . 3/5
Thanks for a great read!
Rebmul chapter 5 . 7/3/2019
not sure if this is done or not since its not marked complete
Nate chapter 2 . 12/1/2018
Fucking shitfic.
whatapala chapter 1 . 11/30/2018
Oof
sayumiko0 chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
Too funny XD.
zugrian chapter 2 . 10/6/2018
Jesus Christ, why does seemingly every Harry/Slytherin girl story have to have sexual assault in it.

Huge thumbs down, should have included a warning.
MartinDeShade chapter 2 . 8/14/2018
Thing is Harry should be arrested. He just crashed their economy. Even if you look past the genocide, he destroyed the only bank and everybodies life savings. He escalating things all out of proportion.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2018
Shame you never wrote those endings, it also seems weird to have a chapter for author notes alone, and I'm also fairly sure that it's against FFnet rules.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/8/2018
Entertaining story, a shame it was never finished, but I enjoyed what was there.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
Really fucking RETARDED
kyoshi711 chapter 4 . 12/24/2017
Harry is a banker and now is as boring as if he was a dentist. Who cares about financing, it's so so boring. Harry is also killing to easily.
Duchess67 chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
I'm glad they both grew up a bit. Hope they're happy.

Definitely a different kind of HP fic, thanks for sharing! :)
A chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
This is an old story, but I'll leave a review anyway.

You used a very awkward description for a box within a box. Furthermore, as the contents of the box would scale in proportion to the size of the box itself (as per apparent laws of magic) when using shrinking or expanding charms, compression could not be achieved as the volume displaced by the contents would remain the same regardless of the increase or decrease in size of the container. No compression, no heat, no boom.

I love this idea and it is completely possible (in the Harry Potter universe) to see it happen if only the box within the box started very small, and then expanded to compress the contents of the main box. That would indeed make a rather large boom.
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