Wow

Run bitch. Run!

nice job, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

It is really good but you are going really fast with the story so much I can't keep up but it is still a good story but slow down a bit

I want more

This is a good story. Please continue. Moka and Tsukune forever.

I have to say, there's never been a fic I've read that had less buildup to a romantic relationship. The only less POSSIBLE would be if they were already in a relationship. You sucked practically all of the fun out of the series. Good job on that.

*This is your notification that Weaver Chance:Ninja-Reader now lurks in the shadows of this story, Congratulations on drawing his attention.

Keep up the good work and you might see other reviews.*

the story was good cant wait whan you finsh the story: Ice Lord

Good god, slow down, it's like watching a movie on x160. It is an interesting idea, just needs more detail and explanation. Not just "oh, you're hot!" "I agree so are you!" "m you taste good." "Lets be together forever."

lol, i suspected it was only his blood she wanted. good chapter, just try and make them a bit longer. update ASAP please.

definitely looks interesting. I'll be sure to read the next chapter, update ASAP please.

Cool. Keep updates regular and make the actual chapters longer then this introduction.I want to see were this will lead to. I read The Unsealed Vampire, and this seems like a different why to write it, with a mysterious atmosphere to in a little bit more description, and this has the potential to be one of the greatest stories on this page.

Soaring Eagle of the West, Out.

A very god start! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Though I must say the title for the story is a bit... strange. It seems like you didn't know that would be the STORY'S title, not the chapter's title. A small mishap that can be fixed I'm sure.