Alice so should have showed him that in the real book it would have saved them both so much time

Wonderful story :) So sad though, I think I almost cried :'( but I loved the ending :D

So lovely...

OME that was amazing so well written truly astonishing loved it

I read this for the contest but must have forgotten to review. I loved it.

I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY. IT WAS SO VERY SAD I ACTUALLY AM CRYING RIGHT NOW. I KNOW A LOT OF PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND OUR LOVE FOR TWILIGHT, AND IT IS REALLY INDESCRIABLE. I HAVE FALLEN SO IN LOVE WITH EDWARD AND BELLA AND THE LIFE SHE YEARNS FOR WITH HIM, AND FOR ALICE TO SHOW HIM WHAT WILL COME OF HIS ONE TURE LOVE IT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY. YOU HAVE A VERY RARE AND WONDERFUL GIFT. I'M GLAD IN THE END HE DECIDES TO CHANGE HER, AGAINST HIS BETTER JUDGEMENT. THANK YOU FOR THIS SHORT GLIMPSE INTO THE FUTURE.

O.M.G. I LOVED it! It was so...so...O.M.G!

nice. and you know if alice would have just done that in the book, we wouldn't have had the disaster that was breaking dawn. lol

Perfect! I've been looking for a fic like this, exactly like this.

I cried a little bit,it has to be so hard for edward.

this as a really good one shot.

That seriously made me sad. I think you captured this quite well - I've always thought Edward would be one to realize his mistakes only long after he were to make them. He's pigheaded and stubborn; it would take her years of sadness, graying hair, and cancerous body to finally get him to admit an error.

Well done.

Loved it! CONGRATS on 2nd place:)