ok the scene from before kinda makes sense now, still

this just feels completely weird, like why the fuck would potter hang out in a empty classroom with some skank.
Second why would he be super surprised if she kisses him, like the girl needs to be in close proximity to pull it off, which kinda kills the surprise.

The whole build up and scene just doesn't really work, maybe go for full body jinx or something like that.

Ich bin ein Teil von jener Kraft,
Die stets das Böse will und stets das Gute schafft.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

Translation which I horribly butchered.

I'm part of the power, who always strives for the bad and always produces good.

feels pretty appropriate for rita right now.

This was such a good story. I loved reading it. It was ery well written. Thank you! You're an amazing writer.

I really liked the story :)
If I was Lily I would've punched/slapped Sirius!

Wait... Why Head Girl Lily heading straight to Dumbledore's office? James knows how dangerous their secret is, surely Dumbledore will be able to deal with Skeeter!

I loved this plot! Great job! :)

I really enjoyed this fic. Love all the drama with Skeeter and Snape, and how Lily eventually realised that she wanted to date James for real. Thanks for sharing.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your fanfiction! It's the best I've ever seen with multiple chapters where the story line doesn't go all crazy reality tv. I also really loved the cast you picked out! Keep writing!

Ahaha that was really cute :)

Honestly, this is a BRILLIANT story. The concept is beyond unique and the characterizations here are lovely. Lily's the perfect combination of average, awkward teenage girl and strong-headed and kind. Your actual writing style is wonderful and fluid. I love it to bits and pieces and hope to see more LJ from you in the future!

hey i loved this story! some parts had me in tears of laughter!

Hi, just want to say that I ABSOLUTELY ADORE this fic, I started, and could not stop reading. I have absolutely NO crticisms. The plot is original and interesting, the writing is sophisticated, the characters are all remakably in-character, the drama is ADDICTIVE, and the emotions were conveyed perfectly. The romance, suspence, drama, angst, frienship-even a little humor in places-there's something for everyone. The writing is so sophisticated, mature. It's so well written, I think that it deserves a reward. I honestly have never read a fic that I enjoyed as much as this one, I really admire your talent. I could just hug you right now. This story is AMAZING, and is now on my favorites list, as are you.

Happy writing

Soleil

I loved how you portrayed Skeeter to be the same conniving irritating gossiping lady :). It's very on target. I also love how you put Potter's trait of loyalty in. I feel like a lot of L/J writers don't focus on that.

Yay! Great story :-)