I like Edward's innocence, mixed with his strength of character, coming out so strongly here. It's neat. But sad for the conclusion that it means he shouldn't be near Bella. Hopefully that won't have to hurt them too much.
Thanks for writing!

This is really neat! Very intriguing. Thanks for writing!

I am just finished and already missing this wonderful fic... there were a couple of things that were strange in your world for me at first, but I didn't mind getting used to it when your writing was so good and your characters were great too. Then way the mystery was solved was also great, fight scenes and all. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Wow, your chapters are really long... lots happen in most of them. Makes it harder to review, but I really love your Edward and Bella. They just have the kind of bittersweet romance going in between them that keeps me looking for more. The mystery that is around Edward’s sire is great, too.

Your fic is an absolute delight! Love it!

Loved the story! And the ending was spectacular! She kept him on his toes all through college and then shocked him at graduation!

great story!

I can’t believe I’ve never read this before. It was great to read an Edward that corrected all of the power imbalances found in Twilight.

She's gonna to freak out when it tells her. Especially if they get near her ""acccident"" area.

How does he know he was an only child. May have had older sibling at school.

Sea bass can be found around California and Mexico. They are a sport fish.

Good story.
But you find cod in the northeast. Maine

Aïe

This was a very good story. Thank you for sharing it with us readers.

This has to be my favorite reworking of the ExB story ever! Thank you for writing such an amazing story!