oh God what if gary gets the virus he got bit twice

jk jk

I really like this fic - not every day i see a good ol' palletshipping fic! :D

Aww, this was getting so good too! I wish it was finished now that Ash finally got his kiss!

Seriously Lance? Just as Gary was about to confess his feelings. LOL

Brock and Delia being secret/no-so-secret yaoi fans? They ship it! But I digress. lol

Haha, I love the bike joke and Pikachu's obsession with ketchup. He really does owe a lot of girls a new bike. ;)

Update! Q.Q I'm dying here not knowing what happened

I reviewed earlier saying I loved the idea of a seme Ash, as just a suggestion, you can have a reversed situation. Where the physical seme ( the bigger stronger and more physically dominant of the pair) i.e. the top, is mentally much more ukeish i.e playful and fun loving. On the other hand the physical uke is much more serious and reserved in personality and is often more mentally mature whilst still being - at least when it comes to the physical aspects of the relationship - submissive i.e. the bottom. Honestly that how I would see a relationship between Ash and Gary anyway.

I love it', can't wait for more! Good luck
Blakie

Seriously, two years and still no update?! Not to sound harsh or anything but you did promise to update every tenth day... -_-

Anyways, as for my review, your POV transitions are well-timed. On the other hand, although Ash and Gary are OOC to the point of almost swapping identities, these kinds of quirks keep the story interesting. Syntactical errors are minimal, easily ignored especially when you're engrossed in reading.

Great story! Kudos to the author! Keep the story coming or else...

Finally a Seme Ash ... I keep telling people... with him training all the time and traveling he is going to be bigger and stronger than Gary that is just a fact of life... Gary may be more serious and mature perhaps, (but ash will definetly be the bigger of the pair), so maybe you won't make him a total uke... That's what I like ie full give and take anyway. Please Keep it up :D

"Not yet, Gary Oak. Not yet." and "Fuck! What's it with Gary and smirking? I'd just like to wipe it off his face. With my mouth." are my favourite sentences here LoL, another thing... Gary was stnding with his head between his LEGS. HOLY FUCK HOW FLEXIBLE IS GARY?

Ohmygosh, dude, it Giovanni! And: Finally! They kissed. Also: No! What happened? Are you sick? Did something bad happen? I hope you recover soon.

“Fuck! What's it with Gary and smirking? I'd just like to wipe it off his face. With my mouth.”
Ha ha ha, ohmygosh. ‘With my mouth,’ especially got me. Ha ha. XD

where is chapter 10! the story is amazing can't wait to read the rest of it , so update PLEASE !

So,I just wanted to say thanks for making such an amazing story plot for me to go off of. It saddens me that you never finished this, but hey; thanks for all that you've written up to now!