Lovin the Anti-Americanism here. (total sarcasm).

great plot well thought out. I'm glad John got to see his daughter.

Lovely story! I really enjoyed the route you took with introducing Earth to the greater Galaxy! Thank you for writing!

This was a brilliant beautiful story. Well-crafted. I especially love the whole "We need something blue for the wedding! Have you met Zhann?" LOL

Great story! I really enjoyed reading your version of how everything played out!

haha great ending love this story. I find it strange there aren't more 'john returns to earth stories.' Any tips on where to find them?

i absolutely loved this.

I just had to comment on the hilarity of that Ben Browder comment. Awesome!

Chapter 26, 4th paragraph, 35th word, squirmishes; pronounced 'skwûrm-ish' should be replaced with skirmish, pronounced: 'skur-mish.' Usually, I ignore this sort of error because they a really hard to catch when you write, but this one made me burst out laughing in the middle of a dramatic speech so i thought I'd mention it. That aside, I loves where this is going. Keep it up, Thanks.

I loved it. nice plot and quite meaning ful.

loved it.

to bad there is no more this is so good .

to bad there is so little this is so good .

that was nice to bad the end is so close to bad there is no more .

man need see more this very cool .