Reviews for The Straw That Broke the Maid's Back
The Reality DumPer chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
aww..so OOC
The Layman chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
...Almost immediately after Mikuru left, the world declared that Twilight be recognized as a ligitimate work of art in perfection.

Then the universe exploded...
Nederbird chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I just read the three little oneshots you wrote that I had left and it was as entertaining as ever, I don't know why I don't come here more often.

The whole Tsuruya-vampire thing was just random, but random equals fun so no problems there. Though kinda suspected they'd have sex. XD

SasakiRolled was the funniest however, I must admit. I really loved the War of the Dots and Dashes, made me think of all those black and white dots on television noise... we call it War of the Ants over here. And Kyouko's and Fujiwara's stories were pretty funny too, then I began thinking if it really wasn't written by their respective selves at all and rather by each other and... noo... noooooo... *shakes head and shivers* Never mind.

I'll have to agree with you that Mikuru seems mentally unstable. The funny thing is that she seems pretty sane in her adult form... maybe she went through therapy of something, since one's mind will undoubtedly suffer from psychological trauma if one's constantly molested like that by a fellow classmate. Either it's therapy or she's got some serious split personality disorder or something like that.

All that's left now is your horror story collection. Till next time then.

Med Vänliga Hälsningar, Nederbörd.
Waht a cfnosunig nmae chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Personally I think that she is just using Kyon to do her job, I mean, she is very unreliable and her only useful power is minipulating Kyon to do everything, after all the future has a much larger variety to choose from so why choose her to represent them...
Rhythm chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
LOL... about time Haruhi got a bit of what she desevred from Mikuru xD
uzukun7 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
that was a great story. mikuru really got liberated in this story and had a great moment there. i really wish this wouldve expanded into a "mikuru lets everyone have it" kind of story. in either case i always look forward to your stories. laterz
Mr Wang 330 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Well, it's a bit hard to write Mikuru OOC unless you actually try to make her that. That appears the case right now. Really, she could be mentally unstable on the inside, she could be calm and collected, she could be a deviant or even scheming something, or maybe she's really just what she shows on the outside: a seemingly sweet girl who happens to get thrown in a bunch of scarring, scary, and unspeakable scenarios. I always like to think there's something beyond what people generally think of Mikuru.

On the issue of this story, Mikuru has accomplished something I have always wanted to see, just for laughs. As an extension, I would have like to see her tell off Yuki for being so damn stoic and silent, and the reason Yuki stares at her is because she is jealous of Mikuru's looks and ashamed of her flat chest, make another jab at Itsuki for his barely contained gayness, make sweet love with Kyon right in front of Haruhi and the rest of the jealous Brigade, and run off, completely satisfied and content with her actions. The universe then exploded. But who cares, since Mikuru died a happy girl! Ah, look at me rambling on again... Hell, if wanted all this, I should have just taken another look at You Got HaruhiRolled! again. YOU'RE the author here, not me. I can't make crack as skillfully as you (crack requires skill...?).

~Mr. Wang
JonBob0008 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
The only thing that would have made this better is if Mikuru had frenched Kyon right before walking out the door. THEN, the universe would have definitely been doomed...
fourtress101 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
After what Haruhi said, her breakdown was expected. Looking pretty and serving tea are her only powers. That was very entertaining, for how short it was! The ending line is where I totally lost it and started laughing hysterically. Something tells me the theme she was humming is the OP to Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-chan... I'll catch up with everything else soon too!

Oh, and did you get my video? I'm not sure if it sent...
MCK Agent of Moriya chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I was half expecting Mikuru to go Higurashi on everyone, especially Haruhi. Made me LOL, mah boi!
Brawndo the Thirst Mutilator chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
As expected, a great story. I never found out why it's always fun toying with Mikuru in fan fiction, but it really works out...
XxMisaki EndouxX chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Oh, wow! LOL never expected her to say something like that XD it's TOTALLY not like her, but since you warned us beforehand, I'll give this fanfic 9/10... you lost a point since my side hurts from all the epic this thing has XD
Brendan Rizzo chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Well, you are most definitely not the only person with that interpretation of Mikuru, considering all the psychological torture she's been inflicted on by her older self, of all people, but that's another matter entirely. This was okay, I guess, but like you said, there was no real point to this. Well, laterz.
LordPlagus777 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Well... I usually rate my stories on the emotion i felt reading it.
Cha-Cha-Cheesecake chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Wow. I have to say, Mikuru is kinda scary O.O

I never want to get on her bad side!

This story was awesome. Hope to hear more from you soon!