Wow positevely amazing story! I was so desperate to know how everything turned out I read the whole thing in a day!) Even re-reading it in 2017 felt fresh and amazing. Congrats!

This story made me so unexplainably anger while reading the later chapters. Like no offense but Isabela was such a bitch to Peter! Like I know he was a jerk as well but at least he tried to make things better and talk. She just moped around and felt sorry for herself the whole time. Man this story was exhilarating! :)

What the hell happens to the son of high king and queen of narnia. And dose Peter ever see his kid.

The story is great! I love how you've made it your own with all the twists :) Thanks for writing it.

So I noticed some things that were off. It is my understanding that Rabadash tried to wage war against Archenland and Narnia because he selfishly wanted Queen Susan for his bride (after she snuck away with Kind Edmond on their ship from Rabadashes homeland). It is also my understanding that Rabadash was turned into a donkey (by Aslan) and had to travel back to his homeland to be turned back into human (for his arrogant and nasty behavior). And if he were to ever go more than 15 miles (or something like that) from the temple (where he had to be during the fall festival to turn back into a human) he would permanently turn back into a donkey. All this took place in the third book 'A Horse and His Boy'. So I don't understand how Rabadash could have attended any of the Narnian balls unless it was before Prince Cor found out his heritage. But in your story Prince Cor and Princess Aravis are already married which means Rabadash should not be able to attend. Also in the third book while Shasta ( Prince Cor) was on the run from his master he ran into Aravis who was running away as well. She ran so she wouldn't be forced into a marriage by her father and stepmother. So it doesn't make sense that Aslan would force Peter and Lia to marry against their wishes.
Please! In no way am saying your story is bad. Quite the opposite! It's great! I was just thrown off by the time of events and certain things from your story. So far it's great. I've always wondered why none of the kings and queens of narnia never married in the series so reading your story is fascinating. Thank you!

This was the best fanfic I have ever read. Cant wait to read the sequel.

HAHAHAH OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH.
This is the second time I'm reading this story and I'm just terribly in love with it. Every character seems so realistic and OMG EDMUND IS SO FUCKING FUNNY!
Please do an OC for him. PLISS?
You, my dear are an amazing writer and this story, regretfully does not get the praise it deserves.
Hats off to you!

so i decided to start this story from the beginning. cause i kinda forgot what was going on. :/
why isabella so mean to peter? D:
did i ever tell you you're kinda sorta maybe too awesome a writer. :D oh and sorry about the late review. and i promise i shall review har chapter ab say. you have been warned.

-voldemort(aka you know who) yes i'm very paindu.

The flashbacks were a nice touch.

This is just amazing; the touches of humor here and there; the character building; each and every line leaves the reader asking for more. Just begging for more.

Coincidence the buetifully woven character and I have the same name itsa wonderfull story

This was just amazing, read it in 3 days.. Wow, I don't really like narnia but I adore it now :) Kepp Writing.

Aww! I loved the dance practice wala chapter! 3 Isabella is so cute! I really wonder how you came up with all these names btw..:O
sorry about the late review.

-you know who :P

Heeey Ra. :3 mil gai tumhari story finally. took me ages to find it! :D you're amazing man! i bet my boots you're gonna be a writer someday.
Awesome story. I love Isabella. xDDD

-you know who :P

I am so glad that you've uploaded the first chapter of Forbidden Fruit (at last!) But unfortunately I can't access the chapter:( And I waS REALLY looking forward to it. I know it's not my laptop or anything because I can open other stories.
So, please sort it out as quickley as you can!
Thank you.