This was adorable painful! I loved it but it hurt my heart to read it!

This was both sweet and sad. It's funny this was actually one of the first stories I read when I came to back before I knew you could review or was a member. So it was interesting reading it again. I feel sad that Alfred died. I wondered why. What made him weak? Was it just his time?

I think this had some beautiful imagery with the snow. I liked the relationship between the two. Thanks for writing this.

omfg bittersweet ending ugh ! i love this story! so much soo sweet and funny!

xDDDDD dude you suck sooo much xDD why do they have to die. jk tho really sweet story

::that was sad!

OMG!

I've read most of your stories!

I love them!

I was always like I wonder who made these.

AND now I'm so happy!

I read most of the RussAme ones and I loved this one it was one of the first fanfictions that got me hooked!

OMG... it was a long time ago when I reviewed this story and I was going by Pagami-Dono.

OMGod!

I really do love you forever!

Wow. I love it. It's perfect~ And the end is sad, but I love it. I like how you explained how the hell he is even a sunflower in the first place...the backstories were well placed and well written.

Oh my GGOOOODDD!

that was such a great story!I LOVES YOU SO MUCH!

I was thinking I would love you even more if you would write Canada/Prussia side of the story...Please...

My sis read the story to and she loved it,but she was wondering about Canada was this happening to him.

Do you think you could write the other version...I will loves you forever more!

Anyway GREAT STORY!

LOVES, Pagami-dono~

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Nyaa this is so adorably sad and cute i loves it poor Vanya he lost his sunflower i hope he finds him in the sky

“better tem for what he was” It’s ‘term’, teme! (*fishslap for me*)

"eleven mouths" It's "months" fool! XD

"If anything, it show in before him looked fiercer than before." Not getting that sentence~

"Alfred was a bit saddened to day the least at the lost of the warm hands on him." This one either. O.O

~Okay, stop using "PLAYFULLY" or any word with the root of "play". It's really getting monotonous. -.-"~

"Ivan just opens the door to his cold and bleak home with a small and genuine smile gracing his lips." I don't see a need for the "just" in there. At all. O.O"

“Ivan then takes no extra time in opening tee door” XD LOLWUT? “the” right?

“Alfred does a light face palm and groans again.” Sounds a lot smoother if it’s “Alfred palms his face lightly and groans again.”. Even if there was an intended Internet/Anime lingo to it. _;

“ “It makes me wonder why, though…" he finishes wondering what happened.”

‘Wonder’. Redundant mofo! XO

“Ivan just looks at Alfred in a shoked and loving way.”

‘shocked’. (How did THAT get past Spellcheck? . )

XD Oh, WOW, Alfred, you are so smooth… (*drooling sarcasm*) I just love his little paragraph of fail consolation… *shakes head*

The hamburgers “sinking into the soil” had me in stitches and then Alfred’s history (I bet THAT…took a while. ; *pats your back*) with the interruption of goo-goo-gah-gah sounding plea of, “Warm me up?” totally snaps me out of my Disney-movie-of-two-hours days and back into the reality that his Hetalia. *INHALE* XD I was giggling for a while, let me tell you… I was so caught in those parts, just imagining your take on Alfred’s past as a…plant. Matthew blooming in Canada and being picked up by an albino *coughPrussiacough* and, oh Lord, even though I don’t approve of them much, France having…pods with Hana-Iggy (AKA Flower England). *stoned face* I’ll accept it~

“'I need to thank every French person I meet for this wonderful creature' he thinks lightly before he goes into a dreamless sleep.”

So cute. )

["Heya! Lookie! I grew more, Vanya! I'm so freaking awesome!"]

Why is Alfred’s profanity so funny to me? Perhaps because he uses it in just the moderation Americans do? XP

[I'll being five hundred meters taller than you!" he exclaims proudly. "but… um… What are we going to be doing today, anyway?" he asks slightly calmed. ] Um, what? Weird wording. O.O And capitalize that “B” in “but”, little missy! O

["M… You feel so nice, Vanya." the smaller blond murmurs as he goes off into his dreamland, leaving a rather awkwardly awake Russian beneath him.

Ivan sighs silently to himself as he watches the sleeping Sun sleep. It's amazing to him how close he's grown to the little man on him. He was everything good that's never in his life; sweet, funny, cute, strong, spirited, lively and so warm. Being around the man made his body feel so warm and flustered it felt like his face looked as bright and warm as fire. In barely two days the Russian could feel himself falling in love.]

*scrolls down*

[Or going completely insane.]

More or less my reaction: Ho, swear! I’ve been looking forward to THIS part! This part, this kind of writing, is what I usually indulge my readers (and myself in) when I write one-shots to tribute to certain characters~

[It even came to Ivan smiles have grown to be genuinely please facial expressions and Alfred, too, was enjoying himself.] What? O.O It was worded so strangely, I understood almost nothing…

Gaw! It’s so cute thinking of little sunflower man loving big Russian fuzzy dude! X3 As a “crush” too! Like it wasn’t obvious enough that it was going to get to this…STILL! XD

America loves free stuff. ;

]Ivan's smiles does a small faltering maneuver at the question and shrugs. "Nowhere in particular, I just took it from a man in Estonia..." right off his dead body as a sick souvenir. he thinks regrettfully.]

*points sporadically at the screen* WHAT THE FLUCKING FLIP! O.O” Oh, and it’s spelt “regretfully”.

[to be giving themselves completely thriough their eyes.]

:3 Okay, that part was just cute. And, you can obviously see the keyboard malfunction, yes?

[Ivan thinks about it and all the things he could possible want from the Sunflower but shakes his head. “Nyet. I think all I want is you. I just like having you around..."]

The “all I want is you” song started playing on a loop in my head…make it stop…

[the mustardy blond] Lol

[Alfred puts on a thought ful look and turns for a reply. "I don't know, really. I just want jump up and catch one! I want go up there and be one. To live so high and carefree. The way they twinkle so beautifully with each other... they're just so amazing!]

“thoughtful”, dork. -.- And at that point I thought that Ivan would show a little jealousy like, “Oh, so you don’t like what you have on Earth, Little One?” er something. XD Silly me~

Gah! From there to the first kiss, I could totally just imagine the whole thing in my head! Insta-fanservice, woman, you are my savior! *o* When it came to sounding like an obsessive confession, I immediately thought, “Oh Belarus/Natalia ain’t got NOTHIN on this!” XD I’m just like…wow! How could a silly sounding story of a man in winter talking to an anthropomorphic sunflower…get this deep and wonderful! I might as well be speechless! (But for your sake, I won’t be. ;P)

BUT! As soon as I see the “~”s and the “I want you” I immediately said aloud, “Oh no, Grey, don’t go there!” Keep the innocence! Keep the strange winter love! Do not make Ivan deflower (*snicker*) Alfred (or the other way around)!

…

It’s nice that you went on with the ministrations of that night as if nothing was different…just that things became more personal. And all in all there was love between them. *pouts* But no amount of therapy will ever get that image of a big Russian guy splitting the stems of a sunflower…

And it ends…sad…It ends making sense. It ends cruelly and subjectively, and even you, I could tell, were in a fit writing it (judging from the many typos ; oh you…), and…it was lovely. It’s not something I can easily forget. Not just because of the…truly original plot and situation, but because o f how the story was told and…wow, I really am speechless now…

Um, this was great, and I hope nothing gets cut off this review and it fits (because I’ve been reading and reviewing this story over the course of four or five days so saved it onto Word…)…

Um, yeah. Thanks, Grey. It was real nice. ~.~

Sincerely,

~TMRomance

just love it a warm but sad story. just wonderful

omg that was so cute and sad! ;o;

I had to stop reading because it was so sad at the ending.

Oh but it was funny as cute in the beginning though; you really did a good job with alfred.

Damn I really didn't need to read this *sniff* but it was well done

hope you do something happier next time!

It was kind of sad, but I really really liked it because I like sad things. It was a really good story!

Such a cute story~

And what a tragic ending~

I love it!