Um wow. Just wow. This is an excellent piece and I know this may sound silly but I love the way you use "He blinked" Sometimes, it really just summed up Finn and Rachel. I honestly don't even like that pairing that much but this is a really nice story. I love prompts they're so fun. But yeah, keep writing!

Liked it, except for your odd need to turn Puck into a bunny killer for some reason. Kind of OOC there. He's a semi-reformed bully, not a sociopath who kills animals for fun.

Ahhh! So good! :D

I liked the sincereity of this and how you captured characteristics of Rachel and Finn poignantly without divulging too much.

i loved this, all the little insights that make up their world. perfect.

Love.

Aw. This is adorable. I love it so so much. Everyone is so completely in character, it amazes me. Wonderful job, I really liked this. I just like your writings in general. I love love love Percy Jackson and Glee, so you're basically my ideal writer. ). Anyway. Enough of me gushing over your amazingness. Good job!

This is amazing. It's so believable that I've decided to believe that it really happened. :)

The part about Finn putting the gold star on his head board was my favorite part. So cute.

I really enjoyed this!

This is really, really good! I loved it! They were all so sweet, I think that you captured Finn/Rachel perfectly. :)

It's nice to see that you write Glee fics in addition to PJO fics. That's two fandoms that I can read your fics from.

Again, great job!

-ShadowPalace

Holy mother of all things great. That was ah-may-zing ;)

Seriously though, I loved the way you wrote it - very unique and clever.

And I just loved the ending. I literally have a smile on my face thinking about it... "This time, he holds on." Ah, perfection.

Please, please write more Finn/Rachel. I feel like we're deprived of many good fics about those two. It seems to be all about Puck/Rachel. Sure he's hot, but I think people read WAY too much into the ONE episode that was kind of about them.

Cute!

So amazing. You have no idea how much I loved this.

I loved this. Absolutely fantastic ideas... my favorite was the feathered beret! ;)

Thanks for sharing !

Beautiful.

Melancholy, sweet, powerful, un-cliched (perhaps 'original' is a better word), sad, LOVELY.