Oh dear... The poor things.

A great story, Very well written.

Ohhh gaaawd :/ this was beautifully chilling. I loved Grindelwald's accent xD and the view of a young Aberforth, so much more likeable than the crabby old guy :P

JKR herself would be proud of this! :D

RXP

I cried at this. :S

Nice version of Arianna's killing. I think you did (that wreched) Gellerts accent well, because it annoys me ven va varvicvers valk vike viss vall ve vime. Good story, keep up the good work :D

that was great, really well done

Wow. That was interesting and well written. I particularly liked your attention to detail, and your realistic course of events. But the last few sentences stole the show: they were so sad and moving!

You should continue to write more "Harry Potter" fics, especially about the Dumbledores.

Well done! :)

Wow, that was really good! It was a great insight into that little event :) Very well done!