Good story

This was a very disappointing read, I don't really like the ending

I thought I would enjoy it, can't say I did. I especially didn't like the way it ended

Amazing story read this and you will not be disappointed

Honestly sucks it ends here...

Good read but I just wanted to see them in a healty non secretive relationship with no baggage... Of course Bella losing her child will always be looming but just, I'd like to see them 'normal' parse without stress.

Sad.. Why do I have a bad feeling about jake...

Ugh... I know it was someone... couldn't have just been a random guy who wanted to ruin some girls life..

I think charlie raped Bella.. And is drinking away his sorrow cause he's a piece of shit.

Tanya cheated on Edward to have that baby though... Let's not forget that... I hate that Edward agreed to be the god father..

That's doesn't take away her ripping apart his heart tho. And also leading Edward down a dark path in the process.. He was just about to really fuck up Jake..

And that just doesn't explain her experience... If she was virgin as in she hadn't been willingly with any other man... How is it she was so good at things? I don't get that part and that wasn't explained by her..

Honestly what is Bella playing at? Edward has to right to be with someone else

loveeeeeeee it!

I understand Bella is troubled, but it's actually difficult listening to her be an asshole to Edward for no reason. His life is a little too perfect tbh honest and it's nice to see him experience different things with Bella but her being a dick is pissing me off. Also Carlisle sucks in this story. :P I hope Edward tells him off soon.

This was long and pathetic as hell.

Holy crap! I don't know how I missed this story. I LOVED your character development. Thx for sharing! (Re: Carlisle - don't they say being mean causes cancer? Sounds like karma to me)