Awww, I loved it! I'll miss Edward's point of view, but am excited to start Emmett and Alice. Do you think you will do the others? Maybe Carlisle or Jasper?

Oh, I love them all meeting the Chief on their first day!

This is so very sad

Loved this chapter, and especially Edward's clever comeback to Emmett's comment on his virginity.

I just hate how Meyer wrote in the guide that Carlisle hadn't met the Denali coven until now. I feel like this wasn't the case in Twilight, but I am probably wrong. It just doesn't make sense to me!

LOVED dark Rosalie!

Really loved all of Darkward's plotting and scare tactics.

Wow, that was so creepy and suspenseful! Excellent!

The description of the sensations Edward feels while dying were very effective. The rubber boots on the bloody floor was disturbing - a nice touch!

I'm so excited to have found this story. I just joined your twifandomnews Facebook page. I don't think I have ever read an account of the time before Edward was sick. Other authors usually make his father die only a week before Edward winds up in the hospital. But it makes it so much more interesting for his father to have died in the first wave of the pandemic. Thank you for the fresh take! I'm excited to read more!

Totally fell in love with this story. I enjoyed every second of it!

Loved it! Thank you for sharing.

So unrelated but I wanted to say it anyway: I came here literally right after finishing "The Undecided". As I said in my review I looked through your fanfic cataloge. And how in the world did I not realize that I read a couple of your other ficitions already? Especially "El Jardin". Your style of writing is pretty unique - I should have known :D I just wanted to let you know: you're awesome. I'm going to continue now.

I really enjoyed reading this story! I love the way you wrapped it all up! Perfect! ;)

OMG! I absolutely love this story and this chapter! I loved all the background info and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)