Reviews for Fitting the Crime
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
So true. So true. Everyone hates paperwork. Everyone absolutely hates paperwork. LOL, ROFL.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Kliiink! I could hear that exactly the way he shouted "Klink!" when the Heroes blew up the waterworks while Burkhalter was taking a shower. So funny.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
An alright fic. Vaguely amusing.

The sentences tended to ramble on a bit, so perhaps try trimming them down a little during editing. You tend to tell, rather than show, which lessens the quality of the story.

That's all I can think of, as constructive criticism.

Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
that was good the punishment fit just right...- good job- keep up the great work
snowleopard13 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I get a kick out of this story and anytime I need a good laugh I read it again. It's nice to have Kinck come out ahead sometimes and not draw the short straw when dealing with Hogan. Oh, how we all hate papwork which is the perfect punishment for Hogan. Very nice short story with just the right amount of comedy. Please write more.
Jennaya chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
ROFL that was priceless! Absolutely fitting the crime.
CaptainSmirk chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
okay, it's not often that I actually laugh out loud, but that has to be the best punchline to a story I've seen this year.
InuJoey chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Im sorry but the only available firing squad has taken ill with the flu , and a severe case of food poisoning.
blair chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Tir, I know I have fussed with you before but let me swallow (some) of my words and say that this story was wonderful. Just wonderful. Klink is my favorite character - I thought I loved the stories that played him as a misunderstood soul (such as Master Manipulator)the most. This story shows him in perfect HH character and I adore it!
Limmet chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Ahaha, this was great! I got several good chuckles out of reading this story... your writing style here is very humourous and really manages to set the mood!

And I enjoyed how everything worked against Hogan for once - in the show, things always seemed to work in his favour, no matter what. Nice with a change of pace. ;)

I also loved the final touch with Klink opening his violin case at the end. ;) Poor Hogan indeed!

Wonderful take on the original challenge idea!
smithcrafter chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I LOVE it! And talk about adding insult to injury! He has to listen to Klink's VIOLIN while he types? i cracked up, and I'm still snickering.
GSJessica chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Oh my gosh! That was so funny! And flavorful. Darned good.

I'm sorry. I should be trying to think of something abusively critical to say about the writing but I'm too busy laughing ;-)
Karen19 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Perfect story, I like how you had a certain General apprehend them, thankfully not a certain SS Major, and that Klink gave Hogan a punishment worse than a firing squad. Truly an unique Hogan's Heroes fanfiction.
The Senior POW officer chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Guess I got a bit careless this time. Caught by Burkhalter of all people. Sheesh! And now I've gotta do all of Klink's paperwork? I've a feeling I won't have completed before the liberation comes. And for 'entertainment' I have to listen to that gosh-darn violin at the same time? That's adding insult to injury. Must be something in the Geneva Convention about cruel and unusual punishment involving violin playing when the one playing the violin can't play. Must remember to look it up if I ever get back to the barracks before the war ends. **Sigh**
Catalyna chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
LOL! I got a good chuckle at this one. I was worried by the dark tone at the beginning this was going to be very dark and serious. Worried also what would happen to our colonel. Very good.
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