I just don't think that you should add those random japanese words. C.C. and Lelouch are not Japanese so they wouldn't say that. And Akira is a wierd name for a non-japanese boy. This is still a good story regardless.

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Akira... lol like from the movie?

Btw, great one-shot. I enjoyed it thoroughly

cute:)

Aww. So cute. I love how you made Lelouch blush when C.C. hugged him and how C.C. came with the peroxide saying "'It'll only hurt a lot.'"

Aw, how cute~ I can't quite imagine C.C. say 'Mou' and Lelouch, 'Ano'. But it's cute~

A rare gem in the Code Geass LLxCC world; a cute family moment. I want to read more of that. The image of those three laying on the grass field. Oh so sweet. And I bet Lelouch was scared for a moment when Akira said he was like dad. He would never want his child to do the thing he done to the world.

p.s. Did CC Mou as in the white haired Geass user?

Great job and have a nice day.

nice! update soon!

Liek, amgod, best storeh evar! xD