I want to read more. I wish you would finish this story. Great job.

No! You can't just leace it there! Cliff hanger plot twist that never got answered?
I love this story! You have captured the characters well and the story is good. Why did you stop?
I like the monarchy idea! They haven't even announced it to anybody yet
I know it was ages ago that you wrote this story, but is there any chance that you will continue writing it?
- a Scottish reader

Ok, now I wished I would've paid attention that your story did not say 'Complete'. I know its been a little over 2 years but I hope you decide to finish this story. You were doing great!

I love how you are writing Max & Alec. Jace was also one of my favorites b/c she didn't allow Manticore to get her, her sister, or her unborn child. Then really cool that she name her baby Max. LOL Now enters Zack? Only hope he's there to help not challenge. Awesome work.

Man, saw that coming. I didn't expect Max to have a problem marrying Alec. I surly hope it works. Good job.

cool stor so far hope u write more soon

Keep coming back to this hoping it will be updated, no such luck. Why not? Its a great story and practically the only way to get into the Dark Angel story since they don't give it anymore. So in a nutshell keep writing it.

Please update! It looks like it hasn't been worked on for a little over a year...

Another great chapter. Hope to see more soon. I really liked the jeopardizing TC conversation and them switching roles at the end.

excellent so far. love the idea of max and alec pouring through books for legal means of how they can be freed. they have genius iqs afterall. makes so much sense!

i love this story, i can't believe lydecker is still alive that guy just bounces back not matter what. i like the plot, the whole idea of max and alec having to get married for the survival of there people is heartbreaking and cute at the same time. plz plz plz write some more soon i what to see this lydecker thing develop and how max and alec deal with it.

much appreciated, X5-264

Excellent cliffhanger. While I don't think the music availability is canon to the show, it was cute enough that you can get away with it. You have a pretty good take on the Max/Alec dynamic , though I think Max would've struggled more with the idea of an arranged marriage and signing her kids up for a committed future. Other than that, you're doing a good job, keep it up. And good luck with your first year!

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Through Darkness and Light /x\

I am still really enjoying this story. Thanks for a great read. The plot line is entertaining and now you have added a new twist. Your dialog has really improved and the different view points are good. I'm afraid though if your college experience is anything like mine, free time is a myth. So I hope you get more written soon, I'll be sad if this isn't completed.

I"m really having fun reading this story. Where did you get the loophole law? Does that really exist? If it does kudos to the story. Plus the whole deal with Max and Alec can't wait to read what happens (only on chap. 2 and had to review). Thanks for the story. I'm definitely going to read more.

OMG! Lydecker's alive? What a twist! Can't wait for the next chapter!