This is an interesting take on this particular part of the movie. I really liked Sora's input and contribution in this chapter and how Naveen helps him realize how he's right for Kairi.

You did a reasonably well job of including Sora in 'Dig a Little Deeper'. I also liked how Louis asked for Mama Odie's help on Sora's behalf instead of his own.

Very cute chapter, the last part was pretty funny.

Very funny chapter. The frog hunters make a good mid-level boss fight.

Very well-written. You've captured Ray's character particularly well.

Facilier making a deal with Saix works well here. At least Saix is more indifferent if Facilier holds up his end of the deal or not.

Pity 'When We're Human' isn't in this chapter, but it would have been hard to fit Sora, Donald, and Goofy into it. Pretty good introduction for Louis anyways.

Saix isn't as active as some of the other members of the original Organization XIII. Though later games would reveal why.

This is the start of a very good story. Though I think you didn't put a lot of research into choosing Donald's form, but it still works out.

i've read your story a few times and i loved it. i sure wish that they should've put a princess and the frog world in kingdom hearts 3. you should email square enix that in the next kingdom hearts game to put a princess and the frog world in it. oh and don't forget to tell them to have such ps2 classics as grandia 3, grandia xtreme, the japan only dance summit 2001 a.k.a bust a groove 3, eve of extinction, project eden, hitman 2 silent assassion, musashi samurai legend, a ps2 remake version of dragon quest 4, front mission 4, drakengards 1 & 2, the japan only heavy metal thunder, tomb raider angel of darkness, herdy gerdy, the bouncer, tomb raiders legend, anniversary and underworld along with a few other obscure enix and squaresoft released for the ps2 only in japan before the merger in april 2003. oh and don't bother opting to have the american and european versions of mad maestro, mr. mosquito and legaia 2 duel saga rereleased on the ps4 store because they no longer have the rights. sorry but the original japanese versions must be released instead. so go tell sony interactive entertainment to stop wasting time and stop being sissies and get on it oh and don't forget to throw in the japan only sequels to mad maestro and mr. mosquito so go now on their website they got a contact us sections in there.

Awwww, that was both funny and a sweet ending.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Sora's snarking in this chapter was a joy to read.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

I glad you did do it! It was a cute story and you tied Sora, Donald, and Goofy (as well as "King" Mickey, Riku, and Kairi) in the mix. Almost died laughing when Lottie drag Riku onto the dance floor! Also, LOVED the 'Sora and Kairi kissing' scene: it was... well, made me think, "Get your girl, Sora!" (what more can I say?)

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It's a "Winnie the Pooh" reference (They spell Honey as "Hunny")

I always figured this would be the start of the level, and just how you made the description was amazing. Sora being a frog with spiky hair, donald is a small alligator, and goofy is obviously a turtle(still don't get it in the games).

so really sweet i love it