will there be more of this story?

oh good not only is Edward a nasty used up fucking whore but hes also a piece of shit cheater...greeeeaaat
and I'm out

so bella talked about her fantasy in her sleep...and somehow that makes it ok for Edward to fucking betray her behind her back? I'm pretty sure her fantasy included HER Edward and if bella hadn't walked in a day early...it was just you cheating on bella with her best friend.
Edwards a piece of shit...plain and mother fucking simple

ya for bella for not being "vanilla" but I still find it strange that she is over looking the fact that her very new husband seems to have no problem cheating on her with her best friend...I don't give a fuck if bella is attracted to jasper...likes watching two dudes get it on...ect ect none of that matters...the fact of the matter is that her husband of only a month is fucking her best friend behind her back, they hadn't discussed anything about it being ok...he just cheated, simple as that.
bella should divorce his ass cause he just broke his vows. she can find two other guys to fuck.

Same here even if I'm a late reader. I'm a bit frustrated not to know the end of the story. It was very good until now.
Thank you anyway for sharing, hope you're doing well.
Cheers

I know it has been 3 years and it probably won't happen
butt I wish this would continue.

Please write more

this is fucking good!

please please please finish writing this story

This is a great story! Hopefully, you can continue it soon!

First off Bella is insane! I would be pissed off that my husband cheated on me and my Bestfriend betrayed me! So it's just ok with her that her man was fucking someone else behind her back? Yea ok. It would be different if they talked about it and they agreed to the whole thing but they didn't. How crazy

Great first chapter though.

I'd love to know how this story ends.

...team Jasper?

...team Bella?

...or both?

well, Well, WELL!

That was certainly hot, explicit, and dirty.

A good time seemed to be had by all.

But I'm seriously wondering how this is all going to play out. Can Jasper really become the third partner in their marriage? Is he going to be okay with knowing that Bella only loves Edward? And as far as Edward goes, does he understand the depth of his feelings for Jasper? It seems like it's more than sex there. Not to mention, his secret...whatever that is.

The sex was wild and very well described. You've got me seriously hot and bothered and wishing that my husband was home, LOLOL!

But I honestly think that the questions about what will become of the three of them outside the bedroom are even more compelling.

It's been many moons since you updated. First of all, I hope all is well in your world. And second, I hope you plan to finish this story and take these three out on dry land to see what will happen in the light of day.

Be well and update soon :)

This is among the best erotic fiction I've ever read! I love the quality of your writing, how polished and smooth your descriptions are, and your descriptions of very realistic emotions and the interplay between the main characters. I'm very impressed, you are inspirational and I'm looking forward to read more of your work.

Love this story! Are you done with it?:( Pleeease continue..