Not bad (:

I should prolly read this before the rewrite HAHA

Please write a sequel this story is really good!

Lol :)

Thus story is hilarious!

You have a good idea. the main girl is just boring and kindof not executed right

Touketsu you mean not Youketsu which is what you had the translation for freeze. My fav translator is cgi-bin/j-e/dict which is unfortunately only a dictionary...

Omg omg omg plz plz plz plz update plz plz plz plz

This chapter was hilarious

write the sequeal soon please. and where r they?

Ah! I can't wait until the sequel! Such an awesome character reminds me of me!

I'm curious... Are you really Sivvy pretending to be a writer? In which case, go foxy laday ;)

If not, I think I may be in love with you. In a total girl to girl way of course. Which i do realise can also be sexual, but let's forget that bit for a minute.

YOU AMAZE ME! I swear, every single thing you wrote as both Sivvy and as an author note was hilarious! And half the time reading your story I couldn't help but think they were things I would do. Like the plotting an evil and awesome plan in three minutes. I DO THAT! XD

Okay... So incase you don't want to read that all, to recap, I love you, you amaze me and your story rocked. End of story.

Danniey x

this was a nice story. i laughed a lot because of the twinkie references. ever since i watched zombieland i can't look or hear anything about a twinkie or i crack up

Loved. It! Update soon

I love the last diary entry you did! 3

This is an awesome story! Keep up the great work! _

P.S. I love sivvy she is awesome!