AHhhh so much warm and fuzzies and fluff! Loved it. Thank you so much for writing these. :D

HI! I've been going through stories I've never read before and favoriting / discarding them accordingly for like 3 days now! needless to say yours was added to my list XD

I thought I'd point out my thought when you claimed Zexion is OOC: I personally think he is OOC in .FANFIC! he's got that aloof/mysterious THING going where you NEVER KNOW WHAT HE IS THINKING which I think are walls to keep everyone out -.- oh, i also don't believe he is EMO, he's just an angstmuffin is all. (but i call him emo, cuz apparently angstingemo in the minds of most fangirls) it comes with brilliance. seeing too much of the cruel real world o.o (my solution is to escape to fictiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiion)

your zexion is so cute tho! i must. hug. the. zexy!

on the subject of your akuroku prequel (which i need to go add cuz i accidentally closed the tab): akurokuangst. even your fluffy cute cheesy fic was angsty for a bit (quite a bit) there. i blame roxy. the kid's emo, after all.

I just wanted to express my still-enduring love for this story; at this point I'm fairly certain I've read it about twenty times. And I agree with your assessment of Zexion - he doesn't need to be in character, he's super cute the way he is.
That said, the real reason I'm reviewing is that I found your tumblr today, and as such the soundtrack to this story. Namely, Mika's Relax, Take It Easy. Please, please tell me you've seen Were The World Mine, which is the movie in which I discovered that song. If you for some reason have not, I highly recommend it; it is a big gay extravaganza of a musical retelling of Shakespeare's A Midsummer's Night's Dream. Based on what you write, I'm pretty sure you would love it. :)

Please, please, PLEASE tell me you have more Zemyx fics...this was the greatest Zemyx fic of all time. Every one I've read has been some lame version of some lame high school drama show or Demyx is a complete ass to Zexion and cheats on him like 500 million times. Anyway, ranting aside, I really did enjoy this story. I found everything I ever wanted in a Zemyx AU fic right here. I am really hoping that you have more Zemyx fics. This has made me smile. On a completely random note: I love your username!

DFTBA and Best Wishes,

XxOngakuxX

nnghsjakdne. So. cute. I'm not a huge Zemyx fan, but I loved this. :) Nicely done!

f*ck yeah this was awesome! ahhh I am having a fangirl moment and cannot get down from this high~~ sorry~~ XDD but seriously, this was amazing! XDDD

I loved this and how you made all the connections to Alive With the Glory of Love, because that story was amazing and so was this!

I totally blame you.

I blame you for the ink sketches all over my math homework, figures in red and green and blue (I don't have a yellow pen); for the (paler) blue-with-a-black-blindfold figure on my worksheet; for the frantic scrawl in my lit book ('every akuroku author gets to write an axel-death-scene. it's in the rules.'). I blame you for the (rapidly growing) amount spent at the iTunes store on songs I'd never had found and fallen in love with otherwise (she writes as "For you I will" fades and "I saw it on your Keyboard" starts to play).

More to the point of THIS fic, I blame you for the realization, today in Chem, that the only pairing I HAVEN'T been obsessively drawing was Zemyx. That was corrected by the end of class. Luckily we weren't doing anything new, and that I'm good at Chem. Less luckily, the sketch came with background drama that I don't have time/skill to write into a fic!

Just remember, it's all your fault. Not that I mind.

"There exists a star above that/Always steals my stare/

And there exists a star on stage that/Never seems to care"

aww! cute cute cute. thanks for this. i agree, there isnt enough zemyx in the world. i especially like how demyx is the schemester and his intellect complements zexion's . great job! thanks for sharing!

I love love loved this story. Too cute. Couldn't stop from smiling, and I definitely downloaded that Hellogoodbye song 'cause of you. So thanks. Because you're awesome.

Hoshit. So, I haven't read this yet, but I've been stalking all of your stories starting from AM Static, because your writing is just fan-fucking-tastic and I'm hooked. So when I was starting this one, I read "I was in marching band for four years, but I spun flags." and I just have to say that I love you. AWESOOOMEE to see an ex-colorguard member who stayed on the team for 4 years like me. ;D But anyways, yeah. I was just excited to let you know. I'm gonna enjoy your fantastic writing now. Byebye and have a nice day.

At the beginning you said that Zexion was out of character but I have to say I like this version of him too. Good job~

I have no idea how I haven't read this before - seriously. HOW HAVE I NOT.

But omg. OH EM GEE. OH MY GAAAAAAAAWDDDDD. I love this so very, very much.

(And now I have to go back and read Alive With the Glory of Love AGAIN)

I enjoyed the bits with Axel, and the otherside to things we didn't know in Alive~

Zexion and Demyx. Oh gods. Those two are so cute :D

And I love the idea that while Demyx is trying to subtely watch Zexion, at the same time Zexion's checking out Demyx xD *heart*

These two are my second favourite pairing~ c: And I just wanted to squish them in love! xD

(I love the song 'I saw it on your keyboard' - I've abused the repeat button on my ipod many, many times replaying that song c:)

Right now I can't think of anything else to say because my minds melted into gooey fangirlness and it won't be going back to 'normal' anytime soon~ ;D

Okay, I'll cave, this was pretty good. ;)

Well, I generally love your writing and plots, so that's not a problem. But yeah, my first official Demyx/Zexion (I think I wrote their pairing alias instead of Zex's name in my other comment to you? Whoops!) story to date! As in, main pairing-wise cause let's face it, nearly all writers couple these two together in most KH boy on boy fanfic. XD

Again, great job. :)

xoxo

Zexion's plan. ...I like it. I like it very much. Very, very much. Fancy dinner and celebration sex? YES PLEASE. Zexion is so amazing sometimes, I swear.

This story is one of the best Zemyx tales I've read in a long while! I read the other part a while ago, and to find the Zemyx sister fic is something quite awesome.

I love it!

-ZemyxDexion