pleaseeeee update

ohhh wow! interesting.. both kallen and lelouch have their geass in the same time.. very interesting indeed!

so even C.C. participated in this, thus making Cornelia now believe that she's fighting an unkillable enemy. Nice demoralizing tactic.

Please update some day please!

What's wrong with this chapter? Well, the unexplained coldness suddenly from Lelouch is showing Kallen could be something considered 'wrong' but if you had other chapters planned in advance, you probably already had said explanation in the wings. Unfortunately, it's been six years since the last update to this awesome fic so it's looking like we'll never know, only be left to speculate... and that, dear author, IS wrong. :(

I don't know if real life happened in a big or small way but I can only hold onto the hope that one day you'll return and do right by your anticipating readers by continuing (and completing?) this excellent fiction of yours.

Great story so far love the originalty you took with it. As for the last chapter I would say that the Jeremiah scenes just felt off.

For my own personal reasons I will vote here on the review page for: "Poll: Which of my works is currently your favorite?" I choose this story so PLEASE update this awesome story already; it's been bloody years! (since September 9, 2010)

This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon

Me encantó la historia! Espero que algún día lo actualicen es una pena que un perfecto fic quede incompleto . Perdón por no escribir en ingles.

That ending. Perfect.

And this...
This is were stuff goes socially south.

Also, slightly confused.
Assuming we are using conventional radio signals, unless the signals were intercepted DURING their transmission then the Brittanian military has no way of getting their hands on any records of orders and such.
Yet if they were intercepting the orders during the battle, I find it unlikely that they would not have used that information to their advantage.
Which they didn't.
Meaning that either the entirety of the professionally trained military decided that knowledge of the enemies movements was unimportant, or that they didn't intercept the transmissions.

Hence my confusion.

Can't wait for your next update
There is one rite? :D

So did Nina die or what?
The student council didn't even notice as well..
Sometimes your story just acts too casually and also CC is also a bit OOC
Though other than that it's pretty good

How come Kallen didn't notice he said Lelouch vi Britannia o-o

oh that was brilliant! using C.C to keep up the impression of immortality, that was a brilliant idea! love it.