ARE YOU CRAZY?!

How can you leave it like this?! (why am I reviewing chapter 6, no clue)

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Oh no! It ALMOST killed Malik! Or did it? I wonder what it was, and why it wanted to kill Malik. And isn't it funny that it comes right as malik is alone? Great story! I really want to hear more of it, so PLEASE write more! I really like this story! XD

Ooh No! Not Ryou too! That's so . . . cruel! Can't wait for more! XD

Well, this chapter was good, if you ignore some grammer mistakes. I like the idea of this story. But why did yugi have to die? It's so unfair! XD

Ooh, I like this. it's like telling two stories at the same time! XD

Now things are really starting to get interesting. I wonder what kind of monster it is, and I'm surprised that Malik didn't get killed.

For all chapters:What the hell is going on here?

Why you no update? I like this story! I really like it lots! Please please update!

CHG- NO! Ryou! T.T

MJ- ;-;

CHG- Keep up the awesome work! Say Cheese Nibblers!

NO RYOUUUUU! D:

I am hooked! Please update soon!

This story is going somewhere big, that much I can tell. But I'd like to point out one thing, and that is how you use your tenses.

One moment you're using past tense, and the other you're using present. I just thought I should mention that.

I like this story so far! I hope you update soon!

Dang only Malik is left next, why are they killing themselves, I really can't wait to find out why.

My goodness, this story is getting better as I keep reading i love the mystery of it. _