She needs to stop running off instead of dealing with the drama in her life.
She is a vampire now not a lowly human. for one thing she can kick fairy boy's was now.
Aro is a villain. Why would Bree be a villain? Is she a plant sent by the Romanians or
Maria? Yeah,she is planning to get herself killed. how do they plan getting by her gift?
Catatonic
How did that pussy capture Demetri?
200 isn't much.
What does Bree get out of this?
Does Alice really believe that they can be friends again?
It is still tense not tensed.
So is fairy boy losing the plot and one step away from crazy?
Never understood the Hermione,Draco ship myself.
Can't believe you write her to be so dumb when it came to the situation
She was in. how could fairy boy get to her if she is a shield?
Where are the best of her group they should have taken care of Alice by now?
A fire really? I realize the building was old but one match,seriously?
I gather that Alice and Jasper weren't mates since he doesn't seem to be effected by her death.
How are mommy and daddy take to the fact that Bella killed their widdle boy?

Eddie"fairy boy" Cullen is so pathetic
Human drinker like her mate.
What will Charlie do now?
Will she feel the pull to Demetri?
She needs to not beat herself up about
drinking from humans She is a vampire
not a wannabe human like those that
dumped her and ran.
It is in very bad taste to withhold
Updates to get reviews. very tacky.
Get again we have Aro in his
arrogance thinking he would be able to control
a powerful Bella. on a side note ,screw Jane.
The squirrel munchers are pathetic as usual.
Why would she still give a shit about that child?
She has her mate right next to her. move on.
I do want to see her to put Jane in her place.
so fairy boy thinks he can attack and kill the
Ice queen.
If fairy boy had any guts he would just build a pyre
and walk into it himself. what is the fool going to do when he sees
Skye? Does she even look like her human self I wonder?
If it bothered him so damn much I would think Jasper
would work on blocking all of those emotions or at
least muting them. no I want fairy boy to burn.
I gather with a T rating there won't be any Bella, Demetri
Sexy time. when fairy boy get to Volterra and she sees him will
she go running into his pathetic arms or will she stay by
Center's side? The word is tense not tensed.
Fairy boy does surely need to burn for what he
did to her psyche. Why would you want them
to do that since they are destined to be
together for eternity. its my choice of words not by.

This was a fantastic read well done

edward is upset that bella believed the lie he told her? it's always about him! he is such a total twat!

why are there a lot of newborns in volterra, don't they have any seasoned guards?

great story

Keep her,really? Why would he have to ask to keep his mate? Does Aro think he will get to add her to his collection,are not mates sacred among the vampire world so even Aro should not w any claim on her after she is turned.

Well duh,she will be saved by her mate Demetri,but will still mourn the loss of her first love and his squirrel munching idiotic coven.

She is so damn pathetic.

this was great I really like demetri and Bella together thank u!

This is a good story, I wish there was more Demetri and Bella stories.

Well that was a waste of my time.

If she is a shield how could Eddie touch her? this story has more plot holes then Swiss cheese. also it isn't very well written .

It was a mansion .why in Hell would she just walk out and say hi noing she would die if they caught her makes no sense unless she is mental .please kill Eddie and Alice.

I wish people would write more Hermione femslash stories.