Excellent chapter. Looking forward to next installment.

Please update

You have a nice narrative voice, and the characterizations, such as there are, are nice. Cute, really.

It helps that the pairing and premise are amazingly cool, too. :D

I hope you write more, either of this story, or this pairing in general, soon. I really look forward to seeing how this one progresses.

~Mademise Morte

i lvoett. so are u just using this chapter for the H-W comp, and then keep going. or is it jus this one shot?

3 DEPP

Hey, it's Katie Bella-Rose from H-W!

This story is amazing so far! Keep updating ;)

Good luck in the competition : x

wow this actually sounds quit interesting, though iv never been one for femminish types storys. i posted it on the new thread n who knows? maybe u will win the comp.

This is well-written, different, and interesting. The pace is quite speedy too. What a wonderful start to your first fanfiction - I can't wait to read more, if you intend to continue you it. You've got me in!