Just finished binge reading this. I absolutely loved it. :) Well done. Moving onto the sequel now.

You need to get ur facts straight. Hermione and Ginny are only a year apart so Hermione would have to be in her 6th year for Ginny to be 15. And if Hermione was turning 17 then Ginny would be 16. And when Katie Bell got cursed that was I the 6th boom & movie A.K.A theislr 6th year. And it was also in the 6th book/movie when Draco tried to kill Dumbledore. Soo if you want to write fan fiction do it right.

They already had Christmas & technically I'm yours wasn't released when they would have been at Hogwarts!

I like it and it is good.

I will not read 'the sequel'.

wow that's surprising, she had twins.

super short but i liked it

Let me guess who's video it was... the Fanfiction Critic? Am I right? No matter how many times you tell people to go away or knock it off, it won't matter.

Your story has officially been blacklisted.

I happened to really like your story. And every pregnancy is different including teen pregnancy so all of you can get off your high horse and see this for what it is, it is a fictional story made for the enjoyment of others. If you don't like it don't read it!

Okay, I'm not going to talk about your raping of Canon, because, quite frankly, you're not alone in the Harry Potter fandom when it comes to that, so you can be forgiven for that.

What is truly frustrating about this fic is the over-trivialisation of Pregnancy, and the fact that everyone- absolutely EVERYONE is in support of the underage pregnancy. It's just not realistic, and quite frankly, you could have got some decent angst out of the potential persecution of Ginny for being pregnant... you wasted a perfectly good plot.

Also, babies DO NOT giggle and smile at hours old. I should know, having been through several baby brothers... babies are NOT cute at hours old, or even weeks old. They cry, they're disgusting, they drain both parents physically and mentally, and they do not give anything in return emotionally until they are at least a few weeks old. Again, you could have explored this aspect and got a decent story from it by doing something along the lines of 'why do I work so hard for these things? What is it? Why are my instincts keeping me awake?', etc etc.

Also, the fact that a bikini still fits a seven-months pregnant girl is absurd. I mean, really. The same thing is is that you're not a terrible writer, you're just truly misinformed on how pregnancy is and what it entails. You could have explored the maddening of Ginny due to the hormones (which, by the way, rarely make a woman get turned on as the body attempts to prevent sex during pregnancy) and potentially being irritable and crabby... you know, like a real pregnant woman.

As I said, your writing style isn't awful, and if you cleaned up the rushed, thrown in 'back-in-time' segment, thought more about the real-life aspects you're writing about, and did the research, this could work, provided the reader is okay with Draco/Ginny in the first place, naturally. Please take this review seriously, I'm not flaming, I'm merely suggesting how to improve yourself.

I wouldn't mind seeing an improved re-write, to be honest...

Since you said that you now understand teen pregnancy, I'll take your word for it and not complain about that in this review. I hope you're writing has improved, though. True, this is fanfiction, and in fanfiction you can pretty much pair up whoever you want to in your stories. However, I think out of respect for the people who created these characters in the first place, you should at least keep them in cannon. We all know how the Draco views Ron and his family, and we also know that Draco is a punk. So the fact that he's stepped up from the very beginning without hesitation seems completely out of character.

And If you don't want people to flame the story anymore, take it down, re-edit it, and post it back up. People won't complain if the story is good (unless they're just trolling around).

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Okay I am going to review this story I know it's two years late,but whatever I am going to point out several things wrong with this : Hermoine's party why would they invite the one House the Gryffindors hate ,the Gryffindors House hates the Slytherin House and vice versa,so they would not invite that House to Hermoine's birthday . Two the pairing Draco and Ginny ? really really ,the Malfoys hate the Weasleys with a passion ,Pansy would have been a better choice or even Hermoine because of "AVPM" but Ginny seriously doesn't work . reactions were unrealistic Draco would not be so calm and accepting about that entire thing nor would Ginny's parents hello Ginny is their little girl,their baby I highly doubt Molly would be all " My daughter is pregnant with the boy who hates our family la-de-DA" they would be upset of course and Dumbledore would not be so blase about the whole thing either. Only Lucius Malfoys reaction was in character Four: The pregnancy I

There is a lot to being pregnant,you have mood swings ,hormones,food cravings ,your body is going through changes . I don't know what else to say this story well everyone is ooc and they are way too calm about Ginny being impregnated by Draco Malfoy a member of the Death Eaters even having Malfoy rape Ginny would have been more in character in a weird way

Awwww! Such a cute chapter! This is my 3-5 time reading this story.