Daaaaaaaaaaaaark. I love it! Powerful stuff!

This story makes me want to cry. Bravo!

God, that's...that's, so depressing, and sad. I almost cried when I read the last story. it was really good, but so sad.

Wow. That's intensely depressing. Good though.

Oh. My. Goodness.

I read the first part and I got shivers. Then I read the second part and got more shivers. By the time I got to the end, my shivers had shivers!

I love the way you manage to paint such vivid pictures with so few words - it's a really effective approach in this piece.

Great work!