Reviews for The Harem Route
DschingisKhan chapter 11 . 7/10/2017
Well would you look at that, you did a Yuri polycule before it was cool. Kind of wish there was more affection between Konata and Misao, but I guess it's there in its own way.
Little Buster chapter 11 . 4/2/2017
This is a super fluffy story and I love it!
Now I gotta find other fluffy stories!
Dragxon chapter 11 . 8/8/2012
bravo bravo encore encore sequel is a must
jfmhill chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
Just wanted to tell you that you kinda mixed up the names in konata's last pov.. you should fix it cuz I was pretty confused for a second
jfmhill chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Great story :) I also like that higurashi (I think) reference
akibara chapter 11 . 4/19/2011
I am dissapointed, you obviously don't know what a harem route is, I also think you should watch more lucky star, your characterization isn't horrible it just feels week, like store bought frozen pizza compared to hand made pizza. obviously I don't think you'll actualy change much, but i would hope you would change the damn name to something that doesn't imply kagami will have more than two or three partners. a harem is supposed to be every love interest in the show, and while i could forgive you for not living up to that cutting it all the way don't to two and expecting me to be happy with it is like being led on a 'date' only to find out that she has a girlfriend already.
ArmorBlade chapter 11 . 1/18/2011
Well, I shall give this it's 50th review - whoopie!

There's a grin plastered to my face for some reason that I can not fathom as to why. Honestly because I can't say the story is necessarily perfect as some points seemed rather quirky and others that seemed to be drowned out by a touch too much detail or narrative to them. Not that they weren't still enjoyable and humorous, your wording still very great in presenting your material.

Best parts I think was how you carried Ayano through the work with a touch of mischief, and the little detail of Yutaka pouting being denied alcohol at a get together by Minami - I'm seeing a potential scene as to why in my mind now. Oh, and Tsukasa's "She's 'mine'!" Bunch of the little things that made this a worthy read.
kittle-uk chapter 11 . 11/3/2010
I just wanted to say thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed reading it and I'm glad that, in the end, Kagami decided not to choose. It's nice to see a polyamorous relationship work out like that. I've been there, once before, and it brought back some happy memories. _
Thyrokio chapter 11 . 8/24/2010
Your story was very funny and simply amazing.
Thyrokio chapter 2 . 8/23/2010
Your story has reached epic level, it really made me laugh alot.

The best Lucky Star story I've read.
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Really awesome so far, Konata's smashing of the alarm clock was well done. I wonder if Kagami will suspect Konata now?
Arch3rher0 chapter 11 . 5/21/2010
The story was pretty good overall. I think it was a bit shakey in the beginning (which is why I haven't been reviewing), but the idea behind the story was too intriguing to drop.

I'm liking the Hiyori x Patty, especially since you were able to write from hiyori's POV. The other 2 side pairings were pretty unoriginal, but it's not like you have much to work with; yutaka x minami are extremely cannon, and tsukasa x miyuki are a rather awkward pairing.

Something that bothered me was how kagami always seemed like she had a hair-trigger for raging. It was good for comic relief sometimes, but it felt a bit overused towards the end.

Otherwise it was a solid story, I liked how you pretty much posted it all when the story itself was finished. Keep up the good work, and hope to read more from you.
Redline57 chapter 11 . 4/28/2010
That was definatly fun. So sad to see it end, but it ended on a very good note. Nice job!
Redline57 chapter 10 . 4/28/2010
That was freakin great! Crazy ending but very cool. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Nice job.
ArmorBlade chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
...I...I really like this. A great deal of it is 3rd person view and seems to cut a large amount of dialogue out - BUT your narrative works it very well I think and is quite as entertaining as the punchlines they lead up to. I'll have to return later to read through this completely when I get some time.
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