Good story I liked it very much thanks for writing

17 years had past…. But kagura is still 'flat-chested'? I'm pretty sure adult kagura is quite sexy.

aww, this made me sad :( (and laugh) very nice job! I love it. Beautiful descriptions and writing style :)

aw ):

but very well written. Good use of detail, and i liked how you hinted to the characters.

and the bazooka arm was pretty funny.

would classify this more as angst than humor but that's alright. Very nice job!

I loved your summary! Your writing style is amazing. I think part of it is that you used the future tense. I like how you built up this sense of nostalgia at the beginning. I didn't notice just how much I felt it until the end. I realized I was so glad someone else was there with Kagura, that they could move into the future. Epically well written.

Hahaha! The ending totally made me laugh!

This beautiful. Short and sweet. It needs more reviews! DX Damn the Gintama community for being so small..! Sigh. Great job, anyways. :)

that was really sweet! i loved their interactions! and okita's robot arm is a nice twist. great ficlet. :)

Your first Gintama fanfic is awesome. It's engaging, a little sad and really sweet. I enjoyed reading it.

:D Thank you very much for the story! XD This was awesome! Had the Gintama flair!