Okay...Disgust is there on my face as well, never imagined Light was gonna get in L's pants, I thought maybe he was gonna mutilate his corpse or something.

But I usually regard the style with which a story's written, so I guess it was still a good read.

0.0
*speechless*

It should have lemon...

O.O

Wow strange, but it makes me want to go back to this pairing. Wonder if there's more like this, not what i usually read, but maybe if it had had a background story it be more properly understood :) Still it's pretty good :)

This was so creepy. . .but so amazing at the same time.

I've read story very similar to this, also Light having his way with L's corpse in a cold, dark room. Necrophilia that is. Only the other story is more explicit. Still, I like yours better. There's smthing more disturbing bout it. The way you wrote keeps Light in character as well as revealing his yearning for L. I find the last sentence " Just as planned" very characteristic of Light, ending the whole thing with a sense of sharp malice and coldness. If only it were longer and more detailed when depicting the surroundings.

...it was...like interesting. I've never seen anything like it? O.O

Nice work though, even if it creeped me out a little, i still like it. I always knew Light wanted to get into L's pants...i just never thought he wanted him that bad.