| Reviews for Almost Full Moon |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2017 Didn't like this to much. Ending was kinda sucky. I think it is a nice sequel to Trusted one thought. |
xmkdr chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Such a light and wonderful read |
SereStarOfGaea chapter 1 . 12/22/2015 I wish you would continue the story.. O have read birth of them twice and I not only like the vegeta Bulma relationship but also their interactions with the rest of the saiyans. I wish Azel would tell vegeta that she is his mother and that he is able to have a better relationship with his sister venus. Happy holidays! |
xFlipJamsx chapter 1 . 3/29/2014 i love the wedding story :D i would like to read more of the series for this fanfiction, I would like to see yamcha's reaction bulma marrying vegeta |
Neth Rana chapter 2 . 8/8/2013 Write moreeeee :) |
Fati Sid chapter 2 . 6/2/2013 I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is almost a TABAHI one. Really well written. Good Job! |
I'mHumanISwear chapter 2 . 11/27/2012 I know you haven't updated in like forever and probably have given up but I am following anyway in a desprate hope you will continue. Can you at least do me a favor to go back and read what you wrote because this is literally one of the best B/V I have ever read and I have a feeling if you look at again you are going to fall back in love with it. I have to admit I know stories don't get a lot of attention because everyone is expecting a self insert or a Mary Sue. Trust me. I have a pretty poorly written one out at the moment but the writing quality was only because it was my first and I was eager to get it out there. I am rewriting it under a new title in hopes to salvage it. But the point of all that was I get it. And I think you deserve some major praise for a great A/U where an OC played a major part. Thank you for writing this and please continue. |
Anoni chapter 2 . 12/19/2011 This is getting really intresting...please carry on! It's a fantastic sequel. I'm enjoying it imensly! |
Anoni chapter 1 . 12/19/2011 This is a great chapter. I love Tules little crush on launch, it's cute! |
KimiruMai chapter 2 . 12/7/2011 OMG NEXT CHAPPIE RIGHT NOWW! GRR! 3 THIS STORY! |
mulayhna chapter 2 . 7/26/2011 Very awesome. They make the perfect couple and compliment each other. I love all the characters you added to make vegeta's pack. Update soon! |
eighteenvisions chapter 2 . 7/20/2011 YOU NEED TO RIGHT MORE! I must have read Trusted One five times already and each time I follow it up with the beginnings of the sequal, you truly are an amazing writer and I can't help but be jealous of your talent and yet addicted to your writings, please follow through with this tale. Despite the off timeline, I feel the characters are in form, maybe Vegeta is a bit OCC but Bulma is perfect and being that we never really see Vegeta's true character when just with his family I don't know if you can ever really say he is OCC when it comes to stories about him and Bulma. Please write more...well I'm done with my pleas, thank you for such great writings. I have literally read 800 or so fan-fictions about Bulma and Vegeta and Trusted one has to be my favorite AU of all time along with the Twin Chronicles and Rediscovering Honor. Frankly I enjoy your writing style a bit more. Again I will ask please continue! |
XBloodMageRikaX chapter 2 . 7/13/2011 love this story please keep up the great work and can't wait until the next chapter comes out 3 |
kcb chapter 2 . 6/28/2011 really enjoyed trusted one and glad you did a sequel to it, but cannot wait for you to complete it, i love the way you brought back Nappa, Raditz, and Turles, also going into Saiyan culture and behavior, you write very well. Will really enjoy it when you finish almost full moon and the first two chapters of it have been quite interesting and held my attention to the very last word. you are an exceptional writer! |
anime chapter 2 . 5/25/2011 Omygod please please please write more I love your stories please update |